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First, you can use selephone to chit chat or give messages with your friends, play game, look up dictionary and other benefets. Beside selephone have some unbenefits like addicted games, facebook or bad website. I think the children in my country addicted games when

First, you can use selephone to chit chat or give messages with your friends, play game, look up dictionary and other benefets. Beside selephone have some unbenefits like addicted games, facebook or bad website. I think the children in my country addicted games when JV0YE
In the mordern life selephone is very necessary and important for eveyone. First, you can use selephone to chit chat or give messages with your friends, play game, look up dictionary and other benefets. Beside selephone have some unbenefits like addicted games, facebook or bad website. I think the children in my country addicted games when they are young and not enough age. You usually spend three or four everyday to play game and sulf facebook. This is the most waste time. The chilren don't concentre about the lesson and subject. Other choose net store play game on the computer all day. This habbit affect their health and studying. Recently,
In the
mordern
life
selephone
is
very
necessary and
important
for
eveyone
.
First
, you can
use
selephone
to
chit chat
or give messages with your friends, play game, look up dictionary and other
benefets
. Beside
selephone
have
some
unbenefits
like addicted
games
,
facebook
or
bad
website. I
think
the children in my country addicted
games
when they are young and not
enough
age. You
usually
spend three or four
everyday
to play game and
sulf
facebook
. This is the most waste time. The
chilren
don't
concentre
about the lesson and subject. Other choose net store play game on the computer all day. This
habbit
affect their health and studying. Recently,
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IELTS essay First, you can use selephone to chit chat or give messages with your friends, play game, look up dictionary and other benefets. Beside selephone have some unbenefits like addicted games, facebook or bad website. I think the children in my country addicted games when

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110 words
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