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Being punctual has and will offer a vast array of potential benefits in future job development for students

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Being punctual has and will offer a vast array of potential benefits in future job development for students. Firstly, being punctual will help students gain credibility in the eyes of others. In other words, one will always be a trust-worthy member of that company. There is an undeniable fact: personal credibility is a very essential factor in the development of an individual's career. One of them, in addition to work ethic, is punctuality, which is the most important factor that will make that individual be trusted by everyone. As a result, one will always be creating favorable conditions for being entrusted with any important work, new and interesting projects, or opportunities. Secondly, being valued by others is another benefit of always being punctual, increasing our credibility step by step. Currently, teamwork or group work is no longer a strange thing in the working environment in many companies and businesses around the world. Assuming an individual does not complete work or a piece of project that is handed on time, or is late for a meeting with his/her colleagues, it will cause stagnation for the remaining members of the group, thereby leading to low work performance, not to mention that the individual is looked down upon by others. However, if an individual becomes responsible, always on time, and meets deadlines so that all the efforts of others are not dragged down just because of his/her tardiness, then that individual not only wins the trust of all members but also improves work efficiency. In addition, that individual will form and accumulate his/her own professionalism. The truth is that professional people, including those at higher levels such as managers, heads of departments, or even employees, are concerned with punctuality first and foremost. No one wants to begin an crucial task, project, or meeting with an apology for an individual's tardiness. Therefore, one may also be stressed or distracted, even make unnecessary mistakes, which reduces the performance of the working session. Nonetheless, being on time will allow that individual to be well-prepared, more confident with his/her own work, which will help that one make a big impression in the eyes of others as a professional employee, and that is also a significant premise for superiors to promote an individual's work through evaluating the process that the one contributes to the business, compliance with all the requirements of that business, etc.
Being punctual has and will offer a vast array of potential benefits in future job development for students.
Firstly
, being punctual will
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help
students gain credibility in the eyes of others. In
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words, one will always be a trust-worthy member of that
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company
. There is an undeniable fact: personal credibility is a
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very
essential factor in the development of an individual's career. One of them,
in addition
to
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work
ethic, is punctuality, which is the most
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important
factor that will
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make
that
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individual
be trusted
by everyone.
As a result
, one will always be creating favorable conditions for
being entrusted
with any
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important
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work
, new and interesting projects, or opportunities.
Secondly
,
being valued
by others is another benefit of always being punctual, increasing our credibility step by step.
Currently
, teamwork or group
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work
is no longer a strange thing in the working environment in
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many
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companies
and businesses around the world. Assuming an
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individual
does not complete
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work
or a piece of project that
is handed
on time, or is late for a meeting with
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his/her
colleagues, it will cause stagnation for the remaining members of the group, thereby leading to low
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work
performance, not to mention that the
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individual
is looked
down upon by others.
However
, if an
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individual
becomes responsible, always on time, and meets deadlines
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so
that all the efforts of others are not dragged down
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just
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of
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tardiness, then that
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individual
not
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only
wins the trust of all members
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also
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improves
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efficiency.
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, that
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individual
will form and accumulate
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his/her
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own
professionalism. The truth is that professional
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people
, including those at higher levels such as managers, heads of departments, or even employees,
are concerned
with punctuality
first
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crucial task, project, or meeting with an apology for an individual's tardiness.
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stressed
or distracted, even
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make
unnecessary mistakes, which
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reduces
the performance of the working session. Nonetheless, being on time will
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allow
that
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individual
to be well-prepared, more confident with
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his/her
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own
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work
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big
impression in the eyes of others as a professional employee, and
that is
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a significant premise for superiors to promote an individual's
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work
through evaluating the process that the one contributes to the business, compliance with all the requirements of that business, etc.
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IELTS essay Being punctual has and will offer a vast array of potential benefits in future job development for students

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  American English
1 paragraphs
396 words
6.0
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