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Government should make people responsible for local environment. Do you agree or disagree

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In the modern era of science and technology. Responsibilities towards environment is mandatary so, the authorities must have to aware individuals for the responsibilities of native surrounding. A lots of factors are there for taking care of environment. I strongly assert with the above notion and discuss further. The role of environment protect is not measured in words. Initially government should motivate individual s to take part in the protection work of environment such as Participating in rallies, stage shows on environment healing, reduce traffic and many more. An example was set by a school organization which was inspired by the speech of chief minister, they described the duties of individuals regarding their surrounding, hence school management celebrate 5th june as environment day with growing plants, poster making on environment and doing stage shows at different places around their areas. In result, it helps to influence the thinking of each and every student and native habbitant as well. That is how government can always try to include masses in social and creative way to save environment from harm in interesting ways. In addition, communities must have to come forward to the working on environment protection purposes. They should start doing action by their own, A clear example wad the prime minister of india, who came forward and motivate people to keep their city neat and clean. As, he started the mission of "keep india clean" on 2nd October. Moreover, Authorities ought to organize the camps for environment ap awareness laws and rules thus, folk should know about that such acts and follow necessarily. Further, To mitigate the pollution namely air and noise by the over use of transportation. Government should include sharp tax on the rate of fuel like petrol and diesel. After that, people less use vehicles due to, the high cost and mostly folk prefer to go by their feets and it will favourable for physical fitness. To conclude, It is very beneficial if government inspired nation people to keep their surrounding clean and safe. Human life would be easy on this planet in the current and upcoming era.
In the modern era of science and technology. Responsibilities towards
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mandatary
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, the authorities
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aware individuals for the responsibilities of native surrounding.
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A lots
of factors are there for taking care of
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environment
. I
strongly
assert with the above notion and discuss
further
.

The role of
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protect is not measured in words.
Initially
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government
should motivate individual s to
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take part
in the protection work of
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environment
such as Participating in rallies, stage
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shows
on
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environment
healing,
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reduce
traffic and
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many
more. An example
was set
by a school organization which
was inspired
by the speech of chief minister, they
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described
the duties of individuals regarding their surrounding,
hence
school management celebrate 5th
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june
as
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environment
day with growing plants, poster making on
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environment
and doing stage
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shows
at
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different
places around their areas. In result, it
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helps
to influence the thinking of each and every student and native
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habbitant
as well
.
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how
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government
can always try to include masses in social and creative way to save
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environment
from harm in interesting ways.

In addition
, communities
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must
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have to
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forward to the working on
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protection purposes. They should
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start
doing action by their
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, A
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example wad the prime minister of
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india
, who came forward and motivate
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people
to
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keep
their city neat and clean.
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, he
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started
the mission of
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keep
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india
clean
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on 2nd October.
Moreover
, Authorities ought to organize the camps for
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environment
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ap
awareness laws and
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rules
thus
, folk should know about that such acts and follow
necessarily
.
Further
, To mitigate the pollution
namely
air and noise by the over
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use
of transportation.
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Government
should include sharp tax on the rate of fuel like petrol and diesel. After that,
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people
less
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use
vehicles due to, the high cost and
mostly
folk prefer to go by their
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feets
and it
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will favourable
for physical fitness.

To conclude
, It is
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beneficial if
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inspired nation
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to
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keep
their surrounding clean and safe. Human life would be easy on this planet in the
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current
and upcoming era.
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IELTS essay Government should make people responsible for local environment.

Essay
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4 paragraphs
351 words
6.0
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