Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Professional athletes make good role model for young people

Professional athletes make good role model for young people KWEg3

Sports is one great field where every athlete puts his inner and outer self completely to achieve the very culmination of the game. Physical fitness, mental stability and knowledge of the game are few significant qualities which all athletes possess. It is believed that athletes have a highest disciplinary quality, which makes them perfect and idealized among the young fledging generations. Fame comes with prodigious inner qualities within a person. Let’s consider an example. Virat Kohli is regarded as one of the best cricketers in the world. But very few know his struggle to the game. He lost his father just before his debut match for the Ranji Trophy where he represented the Delhi team. Any son would have been panic driven and lost is interest and concentration on the game. He displayed his hardiness and tenacity by returning back to the field even after getting to know about this father’s death, transformed and drooped his complete emotion into the game and scored a double century for the team. Ability to handle rejection and patience is one quality which makes a man successful, is a famous quote from the anonymous. MS Dhoni, one of the best cricketers in the world and a cool captain, had a terrible past, where he was rejected during his selections to the U-19 team. His patience was aberrant from any guy of early twenties, as he waited and believed in him at all situations, which brought him to the platform where he could subsume the lessons learnt from all his struggles. Vigor, aggressiveness to achieve the goal, tenacity, discipline, resurgence and patience are the qualities which bring we get to see in most athletes. Australia, the country of sports, promotes sports to a great extent when compared to other countries across the world, is because that people get to learn, inspire and become the person of the qualities which they dream to possess. Young people, till the age of 30, are edifying and fledging. Such prolific and great profiles helps them get a clarity on their work and the very inspiration triggers them to be a better human beings than what they are today.

Sports is one great field where every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorplayeranimalprofessionalcontestantsport
athlete
 puts his inner and outer self completely to achieve the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 culmination of the game. Physical fitness, mental stability and knowledge of the game are few significant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkindnaturetraitcharacterelementaspect
qualities
 which all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorplayeranimalprofessionalcontestantsport
athletes
 possess. It is believed
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorplayeranimalprofessionalcontestantsport
athletes
 have Use "the" with the superlative.the
a
 highest disciplinary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkindnaturetraitcharacterelementaspect
quality
, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 them perfect and idealized among the young Possible spelling mistake found.fledglingpledgingsledgingfl edging
fledging
 generations.

Fame This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 with prodigious inner You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkindnaturetraitcharacterelementaspect
qualities
 within a person. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
’s consider an example. Possible spelling mistake found.ViralVi rat
Virat
Possible spelling mistake found.KohlKohl i
Kohli
is regarded
 as one of the best cricketers in the world. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Possible agreement error. The noun know seems to be countable; consider using: "few knows".few knows
few know
 his struggle to the game. He lost his father This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 his debut match for the Possible spelling mistake found.KanjiRandi
Ranji
 Trophy where he represented the Delhi team. Any son would have been panic driven and lost is interest and concentration on the game. He displayed his hardiness and tenacity by Consider using "returning".returning
returning back
 to the field even after getting to know about this father’s death, transformed and drooped his complete emotion into the game and scored a double century for the team.

Ability to handle rejection and patience is one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkindnaturetraitcharacterelementaspect
quality
 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 successful, is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 quote from the anonymous. MS Possible spelling mistake found.Dhoti
Dhoni
, one of the best cricketers in the world and a cool captain, had a terrible past, where he was rejected
 during his selections to the U-19 team. His patience was aberrant from any guy of early twenties, as he waited and believed in him at all situations, which brought him to the platform where he could subsume the lessons Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
 from all his struggles.

Vigor, aggressiveness to achieve the goal, tenacity, discipline, resurgence and patience are the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkindnaturetraitcharacterelementaspect
qualities
 which bring we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 in most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorplayeranimalprofessionalcontestantsport
athletes
. Australia, the country of sports, promotes sports to a great extent when compared to other countries across the world, is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to learn, inspire and become the person of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkindnaturetraitcharacterelementaspect
qualities
 which they dream to possess.

Young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, till the age of 30, are edifying and Possible spelling mistake found.fledglingpledgingsledgingfl edging
fledging
. Such prolific and great profiles This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a clarity on their work and the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 inspiration triggers them to be a better human beings than what they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. 