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First of all, during nearly 4 years studying at the Faculty of Foreign Language of IUH

First of all, during nearly 4 years studying at the Faculty of Foreign Language of IUH 8dDdP
First of all, during nearly 4 years studying at the Faculty of Foreign Language of IUH, I have learned a lot of knowledge and skills from the super enthusiastic instructors here. Thereby, I realized that there are subjects that are very necessary for my future work as a teacher. First, I have to mention 4 subjects of listening, speaking, reading, and writing skills that help me improve vocabulary and important factors to be able to use English in daily life as well as in teaching. Most importantly, the subject as English Teaching Methodology 1, 2. These two subjects are indispensable prerequisites, with teachers' instructions and teaching demo sessions with classmates, they help me apply teaching methods, as the lesson planning process, and appropriate teaching steps, and choose activities associated with different skills. Like information technology subjects, an extremely useful subject is applied in lesson design, and it is also used to the fullest during the Covid 19 pandemic around the world in general and Vietnam in particular. Thanks to all the subjects at university, it helps me to apply the best practice in my future career as a teacher, and it can be said that these are knowledge and skills indispensable.
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, I
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English in daily life
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teaching
. Most
importantly
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subject
as English
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Teaching
Methodology 1, 2. These two
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subjects
are indispensable prerequisites, with teachers' instructions and
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teaching
demo sessions with classmates, they
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help
me apply
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teaching
methods, as the lesson planning process, and appropriate
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teaching
steps, and choose activities associated with
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different
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skills
. Like information technology
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subjects
, an
extremely
useful
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subject
is applied
in lesson design, and it is
also
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used
to the fullest during the
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Covid 19
pandemic around the world
in general
and Vietnam
in particular
. Thanks to all the
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subjects
at university, it
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helps
me to apply the best practice in my future career as a teacher, and it can
be said
that these are knowledge and
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indispensable.
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IELTS essay First of all, during nearly 4 years studying at the Faculty of Foreign Language of IUH

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201 words
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