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Finding Sollution of problems in the future

There is no denying that in our globalization era a quantity of people should focus more on finding a solution to a problem related to the next period, and shouldn't expend time to think about the past. I don't completely disagree with the given opinion. In my essay I am going to explain why I am agree with the given opinion some reasons and examples From my personal point of view I can say that without any hesitation most people try to solve such kind of problems related to the future. However people don't think about how it caused for young children. In my mind every parent must teach their children try and never give up their wishes, although children are in bad condition. Additionally in this modern world everyone has own technology and it caused easily find a solution to problems It is highly mentioned that every coin has two sides, easily find a solution also has many pros and cons. Although we haven't spend more time to resolve, all this factors are caused us to lazy-bones and young teenagers aren't come across any kind of problems. In my mind if they are happen upon, I can't believe they aren't solve to the problems Taking everything in to consideration every people must try to solve such kind of problems think about the past and related to the future. According to my point of view people should come across some problems and try to solve themselves
There is no denying that in our globalization era a quantity of
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people
should focus more on finding a solution to a
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problem
related to the
next
period, and shouldn't expend time to
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think
about the past. I don't completely disagree with the
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given
opinion. In my essay I am going to
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explain
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agree
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some
reasons and
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examples


From my personal point of view I can say that without any hesitation most
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people
try to
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solve
such kind of
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problems
related to the future.
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However
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people
don't
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think
about how it caused for young children. In my mind every parent
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must
teach their children
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try and
never give up their wishes, although children are in
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bad
condition.
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Additionally
in this modern world everyone has
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own
technology and it caused
easily
find a solution to
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problems


It is
highly
mentioned that every coin has two sides,
easily
find a solution
also
has
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many
pros and cons. Although we
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more time to resolve, all
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us to lazy-bones and young
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teenagers
aren't
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come
across any kind of
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problems
. In my mind if they are
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happen
upon, I can't believe they aren't
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solve
to the
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problems


Taking everything in to consideration every
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people
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must
try to
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solve
such kind of
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problems
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think
about the past and related to the future. According to my point of view
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people
should
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come
across
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some
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problems
and try to
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themselves
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IELTS essay Finding Sollution of problems in the future

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
245 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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