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Describe your experience as a game developer.

Well, basically when i was a child. I interacted with lots of IT things. as i was growing up these things made my interest in computers. So, i pursed my dgree in computer science. As we know computer is the field of coding. So, i have to work as developer. After the completion of graduation, i started searching for a job immediately. After a couple of weeks i found a job with the reference of my friend. It was an internship in the field of gaming and i started working as a game developer. In the beginning i was not familiar with how to make games. After the time passed i got few years of experience in this field and now i am able to develop a game.
Well,
basically
when
i
was a child. I interacted with lots of IT things.
as
i
was growing up these things made my interest in computers.
So
,
i
pursed my
dgree
in computer science.
As
we know computer is the field of coding.
So
,
i
have to
work as developer. After the completion of graduation,
i
started
searching for a job immediately.
After
a couple of weeks
i
found a job with the reference of my friend. It was an internship in the field of gaming and
i
started
working as a game developer. In the beginning
i
was not familiar with how to
make
games. After the time passed
i
got
few years of experience in this field and
now
i
am able to develop a game.
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IELTS essay Describe your experience as a game developer.

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