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Finding a good job is a herculean task in this challenging world.

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Finding a good job is a herculean task in this challenging world. It is commonly believed that tertiary education is the best way to secure an ideal job. Although this view is supported by some, others have a strong counter-argument that gaining work experience is a better option. In my opinion, education and work experience are both equally important. It depends entirely upon the requirements of the job. To commence with, it is globally accepted that a university degree is the key to great career opportunities. Some professions demand a set of skills that can only be gained by a detailed study of the subject in college. For example, to become a doctor, an engineer, an architect, and an advocate a university degree is a must in order to equip oneself with the comprehensive knowledge of the subject to cater to these professional requirements. Therefore, it is said that a certificate of tertiary education is extremely important to be in professions where high level skills and thorough knowledge are the first and foremost prerequisite. On the contrary, there are professions which focus on experience rather than the degree. Entrepreneurship is one of the best examples in this category. For example, one does not need a university degree to open a restaurant or a workshop. These careers are based on practical experiences rather than university education. For example, in India the extremely successful small scale business named Lijat Pappad is owned and run by a group of women who neither pursued studies nor possessed any degrees. Thus, it is evident that in some sectors experience is more important than formal educational qualifications. To conclude, it is the nature of the job which requires whether education is more important than work experience. A university degree is a must in certain sectors whereas experience is more relevant in some other sectors.
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herculean
task in this challenging world. It is
commonly
believed that tertiary
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education
is the best way to secure an ideal job. Although this view
is supported
by
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some
, others have a strong counter-argument that gaining work
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experience
is a better option. In my opinion,
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education
and work
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experience
are both
equally
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important
. It depends
entirely
upon the requirements of the job.

To commence with, it is globally
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accepted
that a
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university
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degree
is the key to great career opportunities.
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Some
professions demand a set of
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skills
that can
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only
be gained
by a detailed study of the subject in college. For
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example
, to become a doctor, an engineer, an architect, and an advocate a
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university
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degree
is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
in order to equip oneself with the comprehensive knowledge of the subject to cater to these professional requirements.
Therefore
, it
is said
that a certificate of tertiary
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education
is
extremely
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important
to be in professions where high level
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skills
and thorough knowledge are the
first
and foremost prerequisite.

On the contrary
, there are professions which focus on
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experience
rather
than the
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degree
. Entrepreneurship is one of the best
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examples
in this category. For
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example
, one does not need a
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university
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degree
to open a restaurant or a workshop. These careers
are based
on practical
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experiences
rather
than
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university
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education
. For
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example
, in India the
extremely
successful
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small
scale business named
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Lijat
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Pappad
is
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owned
and run by a group of women who neither pursued studies nor possessed any
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degrees
.
Thus
, it is evident that in
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some
sectors
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experience
is more
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important
than formal educational qualifications.

To conclude
, it is the nature of the job which requires whether
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education
is more
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important
than work
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experience
. A
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university
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degree
is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
in certain sectors whereas
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experience
is more relevant in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other sectors.
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IELTS essay Finding a good job is a herculean task in this challenging world.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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