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Some people think that school uniforms should be abolished in all schools.

Some people think that school uniforms should be abolished in all schools. Kwl19
Some people believe that school regular uniforms should be cancelled in all academy's. Personally, I strongly disagree with the given idea because school uniforms cannot be cancelled. To begin with, school uniforms are playing big role in our society. Because, It is divided school boys and girls from university and college students. In every sphere of jobs we have special uniforms or dress codes. As an example: our society do special and regular uniforms for the boys and girls which can be suitable and normal for schools principles too. Also, I wear such kind of beautiful and stunningly attractive suit with tie when I was a schoolboy. Even though, I disagree with school uniform cannot be cancelled because they have many advantages than disadventages. With respect to uniforms are total necessary to build real educational atmosphere. The school uniform also helps to pupils to rise academically performer. Other people believe that school special uniform should be cancelled. Because, they are taking much time to wear it in the morning. And some parents claim that wearing tie and suit should be exploit from the schoolchilds. Although, they want to wear their children in free clothes as it is much more better to feel comfortable themselves. It is blatantly obvious if our government permits them or cancelled school uniforms our study system can lost quality of education. To sum up, school uniforms should not be cancelled in schools. Because, it can influence in study system too. I am hundred percent sure that schoolchilds should wear uniform it is more beautiful and more attractive of schoolchilds.
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IELTS essay Some people think that school uniforms should be abolished in all schools.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
5.5
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