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Write a proposal (220-260 words) to the Dean to express your concern, suggest some activities, and ask for any resources needed to run the club.

Write a proposal (220-260 words) to the Dean to express your concern, suggest some activities, and ask for any resources needed to run the club. Lrb63
Introduction The purpose of this proposal is to discuss the intended course of action in establishing a reading club and suggesting practical strategies to widely spread reading habit of students in the Faculty of English Language Teacher Education. Background From my observational evidence, reading culture is not pervasive among college students currently. With the advocacy of cutting-edge technology, the young tend to spend most of their spare time enjoying accessing social networking or playing online game, which is quite a waste of time and might be harmful to their mental health. Therefore, on behalf of a member of the Youth Union Committee, I suppose it is definitely indispensable to form a club, which could encourage students to focus more on their reading habit. Activities ● Workshop: My first recommendation would be to hold a workshop that allow people to meet and interact with inspirational authors in order to lift the reading spirit of the students. This would mean that participants could have more enthusiasm and motivation to invest more time on their reading. ● Competition: Another possibility would be to organize competitions that are related to reading book such as book review or story creation. These competitions could effectively stimulate excitement as well as imagination of readers. Resources ● Space: It would be a great choice if we had a large and safe room, which can contain dozens of people joining events such as the workshops or the competitions. Simultaneously, it is quite essential to have a shared space to run the club in the future. For these reasons, one possibility would be to use one of the rooms in B2 building. ● Expenditure: I propose asking the faculty and other donors, who concern about reading, for sponsorship for the accolade of competitions as well as the organization costs of workshops. Conclusion I feel certain that the course of action proposed above will achieve practical benefits for both the university and the students. I hope that the scheme outlined presented in this proposal meets with your approval.
Introduction

The purpose of this proposal is to discuss the intended course of action in

establishing a
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reading
club and suggesting practical strategies to
widely
spread
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reading
habit of
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students
in the Faculty of English Language Teacher Education.

Background

From my observational evidence,
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reading
culture is not pervasive among college
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
currently
. With the advocacy of cutting-edge technology, the young tend to spend most of

their spare time enjoying accessing social networking or playing online game, which

is quite a waste of time and might be harmful to their mental health.
Therefore
, on behalf of a member of the Youth Union Committee, I suppose it is definitely indispensable to form a club, which could encourage
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to focus more on their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reading
habit.

Activities

● Workshop: My
first
recommendation would be to hold a workshop that

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allow
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
and interact with inspirational authors in order to lift the

reading spirit of the
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students
. This would mean that participants could have more enthusiasm and motivation to invest more time on their
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reading. ●
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Competition
:
Another possibility
would be to organize
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competitions
that
are related
to
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reading
book such as book review or story creation. These
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
competitions
could
effectively
stimulate excitement
as well
as imagination of readers.

Resources

● Space: It would be a great choice if we had a large and safe room, which can

contain dozens of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
joining
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
such as the workshops or

the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
competitions
.
Simultaneously
, it is quite essential to have a shared space to

run the club in the future. For these reasons, one possibility would be to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
one of the rooms in B2 building.

● Expenditure: I propose asking the faculty and other donors, who

concern about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reading
, for sponsorship for the accolade of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
competitions
as well
as the organization costs of workshops.

Conclusion

I feel certain that the course of action proposed above will achieve practical

benefits for both the university and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
. I hope that the scheme outlined

presented in this proposal meets with your approval.
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IELTS essay Write a proposal (220-260 words) to the Dean to express your concern, suggest some activities, and ask for any resources needed to run the club.

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
337 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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