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MANY PARTS OF THE WORLD ARE LOSING IMPORTANT NATURAL RESOURCES SUCH AS FOREST, ANIMALS AND CLEAN WATER

MANY PARTS OF THE WORLD ARE LOSING IMPORTANT NATURAL RESOURCES SUCH AS FOREST, ANIMALS AND CLEAN WATER wBO5m
AS HUMAN POPULATION IS DRAMATICALLY RISING EACH YEAR, PEOPLES REQUIREMENTS ARE INCREASING TOO. WE NEED MORE FOOD, MORE WATER, MORE PLACE TO LIVE. AS A RESULT OF THIS MANY PART OF THE WORLD ARE LOSING IRREPLACEABLE RESOURCES SUCH AS FOREST, WATER OR ANIMALS. WE WILL SHARE EXAMPLES IN ABOVE PARAGRAPHS. THE REASON WHY WE THINK THAT ANIMALS SHOULD BE PERSERVED IS THAT ALL LIVING CREATURES ON THE PLANET ARE CONNECTED WITH EACHOTHER. MOREOVER, THE DISAPPEARENCE OF ONE SPECIES CAN CAUSE DRAMATIC CHANGES IN THE EARTH, AND EVEN DEATH OF MANY LIVING CREATURES SUCH AS THE HUGE NUMBER OF BAT INCREASES THE POPULATION OF INSECTS SIGNIFICANTLY DECREASE DUE TO DISAPPEARENCE OF PLANTS AND ANIMALS. WE THINK IT IS VERY IMPORTANT TO PRESERVE ALL SPECIES ON OUR PLANET AND LIVE IN HARMONY WITH OUR ENVIRONMENT. IN ADDITION TO, THE MOST IMPORTANT REASON WHY WE THINK THAT ANIMALS SHOULD BE SAVED ISTHAT WE PERSANALLY DONOT WANT MY CHILDREN TO LEARN ABOUT DIFFERENT ANIMALS FROM BOOK AND NOT BE ABLE TO SEE THEM ALIVE. WE THINK IT IS SHAMEFUL FOR HUMANKIND TO EXPLAIN OUR REASON WHY THOSE ANIMALS DISAPPEARED.
AS HUMAN POPULATION IS
DRAMATICALLY
RISING EACH YEAR, PEOPLES REQUIREMENTS ARE INCREASING TOO. WE NEED MORE FOOD, MORE WATER, MORE PLACE TO
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LIVE
.
AS A RESULT
OF THIS
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MANY
PART OF THE WORLD ARE LOSING IRREPLACEABLE RESOURCES SUCH AS FOREST, WATER OR
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ANIMALS
. WE WILL SHARE EXAMPLES IN ABOVE PARAGRAPHS.

THE REASON WHY WE
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THINK
THAT
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ANIMALS
SHOULD BE
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PERSERVED
IS THAT ALL LIVING CREATURES ON THE PLANET
ARE CONNECTED
WITH
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EACHOTHER
.
MOREOVER
, THE
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DISAPPEARENCE
OF ONE SPECIES CAN CAUSE DRAMATIC
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CHANGES
IN THE EARTH, AND EVEN DEATH OF
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MANY
LIVING CREATURES SUCH AS THE HUGE NUMBER OF BAT INCREASES THE POPULATION OF INSECTS
SIGNIFICANTLY
DECREASE DUE TO
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DISAPPEARENCE
OF PLANTS AND
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ANIMALS
. WE
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THINK
IT IS
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VERY
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IMPORTANT
TO PRESERVE ALL SPECIES ON OUR PLANET AND
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LIVE
IN HARMONY WITH OUR ENVIRONMENT.

IN ADDITION
TO, THE MOST
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IMPORTANT
REASON WHY WE
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THINK
THAT
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ANIMALS
SHOULD
BE SAVED
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ISTHAT
WE
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PERSANALLY
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DONOT
WANT MY CHILDREN TO LEARN ABOUT
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DIFFERENT
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ANIMALS
FROM BOOK AND NOT BE ABLE TO
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SEE
THEM ALIVE. WE
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THINK
IT IS SHAMEFUL FOR HUMANKIND TO
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EXPLAIN
OUR REASON WHY THOSE
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ANIMALS
DISAPPEARED.
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IELTS essay MANY PARTS OF THE WORLD ARE LOSING IMPORTANT NATURAL RESOURCES SUCH AS FOREST, ANIMALS AND CLEAN WATER

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
185 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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