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It is suggested that the climate change can be overcome. Do you agree with it?

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We have a number of national celebrations, such as Independence day, republic day, victory day. For example, in republic day, we celebrate that the governing system of state was turned into a republic. I think elder people enjoy national celebrations more because they can interact with these celebration easier than young population. For example, some of them even had chance to experience the early days of new state. I don't think organisations held for national celebrations are waste of money unless too much money is spent on because these celebrations are kind of ways to put people together, make feel them they are a member of big group. When I see something funny or listen something funny, I can easily laugh. I can laugh on a sit-com, a funny story or a friend who tells a funny joke. I like making others laugh, especially ones who I love because I feel happy when I see someone who I love is happy. Yes, It is important for people to laugh. It is scientifically proved that laughing and being positive towards life have positive impacts on both brain and body health. I don't think that laughing always means feeling happy because some people sometimes laugh to express his/her angriness or some just laugh when he/she comes across with a silly, annoying situation. I am studying in an LLM, and I needed to write a dissertation. I came with an idea that I could study on, but my advisor said me that it is very large area to study on for a master dissertation, so I decided to focus on a narrower area. At first, I wanted to focus on case-law related to discrimination, but at the end, I replaced it with sexual discrimination. It was less harder and less time-consuming to study on, so I was able to complete a useful thesis.
We have a number of national
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, such as
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Independence day
, republic day, victory day.
For example
, in republic day, we celebrate that the governing system of state
was turned
into a republic.

I
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think
elder
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people
enjoy national
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celebrations
more
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because
they can interact with these
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celebration
easier than young population.
For example
,
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some
of them even had chance to experience the early days of new state.

I don't
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think
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organisations
held for national
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celebrations
are waste of money unless too much money
is spent
on
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because
these
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celebrations
are kind of ways to put
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people
together,
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make
feel them they are a member of
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big
group.

When I
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see
something
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funny
or listen something
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funny
, I can
easily
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laugh
. I can
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laugh
on a sit-com, a
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story or a friend who
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tells
a
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funny
joke.

I like making others
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,
especially
ones who I
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love
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because
I feel happy when I
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see
someone who I
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love
is happy.

Yes, It is
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important
for
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people
to
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laugh
. It is
scientifically
proved that laughing and being
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positive
towards life have
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positive
impacts on both brain and body health.

I don't
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think
that laughing always means feeling happy
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because
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some
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sometimes
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to express his/her
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angriness
or
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some
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when he/she
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comes
across with a silly, annoying situation.

I am studying in an
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LLM
, and I needed to write a dissertation.
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I
came with an
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idea
that I could study on,
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but
my advisor
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said
me that it is
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very
large area to study on for a master dissertation,
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so
I decided to focus on a narrower area. At
first
, I wanted to focus on case-law related to discrimination,
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but
at the
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end
, I replaced it with sexual discrimination. It was
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so
I was able to complete a useful thesis.
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IELTS essay It is suggested that the climate change can be overcome. Do you agree with it?

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
310 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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