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“Feminism is about giving women choice.

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“Feminism is about giving women choice. Feminism is not a stick with which to beat other women. It’s about freedom. It’s about liberation. It’s about equality, ” said the famous actress Emma Watson in 2014 during an interview. Feminism isn’t something that came out of nowhere. It took years to develop and reach where it is today. According to the Oxford dictionary, feminism is defined as the belief and the aim that women should have the same rights and opportunities as men. Over the years, women have become aware of their rights. This essay/report will discuss the development of feminism over the past few centuries.
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. According to the Oxford dictionary,
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feminism
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women
should have the same rights and opportunities as
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men
. Over the years,
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have become aware of their rights. This essay/report will discuss the development of
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over the past few centuries.

IELTS essay “Feminism is about giving women choice.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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