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Human activites have negative effects on plant and animal species

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Industrialisation and deforestation carried out by humans have destroyed the biodiversity. Some exotic species of wild animals and plants are diminishing, declining or disappearing. Many ecosystems are disturbed. All these are a threat to human survival as well. Some think that the damage cannot be undone while others believe that some measures could be taken to improve the present situation. I firmly believe that the situation could be improved. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall examine both sides and also explain how things can be ameliorated.
Possible spelling mistake. 'Industrialisation' is British English.
Industrialisation
and deforestation carried out by humans have
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destroyed
the biodiversity.
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Some
exotic species of wild animals and plants are diminishing, declining or disappearing.
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Many
ecosystems
are disturbed
. All these are a threat to human survival
as well
.
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Some
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think
that the damage cannot be undone while others believe that
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some
measures could
be taken
to
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improve
the present situation. I
firmly
believe that the situation could be
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improved
. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall examine both sides and
also
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explain
how things can
be ameliorated
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IELTS essay Human activites have negative effects on plant and animal species

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  American English
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86 words
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