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Fees for higher education are expensive and not affordable for everyone so according to some

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Fees for higher education are expensive and not affordable for everyone so according to some university should be free for all people, regardless of their background. In my opinion, offering everyone free university education would be problematic and, therefore, should only be offered tocertain individuals. Having free university education for everyone would put a tremendous financial strain on a country. Universities would have no income from fees and, consequently, they would rely completely on the state for funding. Doing this means taking funds from other much needed areas, such as the health system, in order to allocate money to universities. For the majority of countries, particularly developing and underdeveloped countries, this would not be a financially viable option. Another point to consider is that offering all people free tertiary education would tempt many people to enter university whether they were interested or not. In other words, rather than choosing to get a job, some young people would opt for doing a degree to which they would only half-heartedly apply themselves. This would not only be a waste of a country’s finances but also a waste of human resources. Finally, the best solution would be to keep university fees but still offer some free places to gifted students from poor backgrounds. This would ensure that talented, intelligent students who cannot afford to pay for higher education would still get educated and trained. As a result, society would benefit by getting the right people trained and valuable financial resources would not be wasted. In conclusion, abolishing university fees is not feasible for most countries but offering free places toparticular students who have limited financial means is a much better use of a country’s resources.
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people
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everyone
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free
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university
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education
would be problematic and,
therefore
, should
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be offered
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tocertain
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free
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university
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education
for everyone would put a tremendous financial strain on a country.

Universities would have no income from
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fees
and,
consequently
, they would rely completely on the state for funding. Doing this means taking funds from other
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much needed
areas, such as the health system, in order to allocate money to
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universities
. For the majority of
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countries
,
particularly
developing and underdeveloped
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countries
, this would not be a
financially
viable option.

Another point to consider is that offering all
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people
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free
tertiary
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education
would tempt
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many


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people
to enter
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university
whether they
were interested
or not.
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,
rather
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than


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choosing
to
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get
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some
young
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people
would opt for doing a degree to which they would
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only
half-
heartedly
apply themselves. This would not
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be a waste of a
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finances
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also
a waste of human resources.

Finally
, the best solution would be to
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offer
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gifted
students from poor backgrounds. This would ensure that talented, intelligent students who cannot afford to pay for higher
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education
would
still
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get
educated and trained.
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,

society would benefit by getting the right
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people
trained and valuable financial resources would not
be wasted
.

In conclusion
, abolishing
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university
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fees
is not feasible for most
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countries
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but
offering free

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places
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toparticular
students who have limited financial means is a much better
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country’s
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IELTS essay Fees for higher education are expensive and not affordable for everyone so according to some

Essay
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13 paragraphs
282 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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