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I have a fantasy of being a developer in the future. As a result, I am constantly striving to improve myself. FPT University is where I am currently enrolled. I'm hoping that the knowledge I gain there over the next four years will assist me in realizing my childhood dream. I am willing to devote a significant amount of time to learning useful skills in order to become a good software engineer. Finally, despite the fact that I am aware that there will be many challenges ahead of me, I will never allow myself to give up before reaching my goals.
I have a fantasy of being a developer in the future.
As a result
, I am
constantly
striving to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
myself. FPT University is where I am
currently
enrolled. I'm hoping that the knowledge I gain there over the
next
four years will assist me in realizing my childhood dream.

I am willing to devote a significant amount of time to learning useful
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
in order to become a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
software engineer.
Finally
, despite the fact that I am aware that there will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
challenges ahead of me, I will never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
myself to give up
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
reaching my goals.
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IELTS essay fbaksdfjadklfhsjdakhsfjakdhsf

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
101 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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