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Describe a bag you want to own. You should say: what kind of bag it is where you want to buy it how much it will cost you and explain why you want this kind of bag.

Describe a bag you want to own. You should say: what kind of bag it is where you want to buy it how much it will cost you and explain why you want this kind of bag. 53EJB
I think bags are very essential for everyone. In other words people can carry their things easily. I also found of bags even i have number of bags such as tote bag, backpack, clutch and so on. But here i would like to talk about a that which i want to buy now. That is shoulder bag, which is very beautiful and handy. Actually i want to buy this bag from colette brand, i know there are a plethora of brand like couch, guess, nike and so on but my favourite is colette because number of reasons. First of all these bag are long lasting, good quality as well as cheap able. Moreover, this brand available in Australia as well as New Zealand. Actually my cousin sister living in Australia and she told me about this bag that how good this brand and about material which is long lasting. Then i search on internet about this brand. As I mentioned before that brand is very cheapable than others. Sometime they also have special price such as on easter day, Christmas day. Since i want to buy this shoulder bag, i can easily carry my needy things. When i have to go somewhere.
I
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think
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bags
are
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very
essential for everyone.
In other words
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people
can carry their things
easily
. I
also
found of
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bags
even
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i
have number of
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bags
such as tote
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bag
, backpack, clutch and
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so
on.
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But
here
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i
would like to talk about a that which
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i
want to
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buy
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now
.
That is
shoulder
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bag
, which is
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very
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beautiful
and handy. Actually
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i
want to
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buy
this
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bag
from
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colette
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brand
,
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i
know there are a plethora of
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brand
like couch, guess,
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nike
and
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so
on
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but
my
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favourite
is
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colette
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because
number of reasons.
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First of all
these
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bag
are
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long lasting
,
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good
quality
as well
as
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cheap
able.
Moreover
, this
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brand
available in Australia
as well
as New Zealand. Actually my cousin sister living in
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Australia and
she
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told
me about this
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bag
that how
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good
this
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brand
and about material which is
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long lasting
. Then
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i
search on internet about this
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brand
. As I mentioned
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before
that
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brand
is
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very
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cheapable
than others. Sometime they
also
have special price such as on easter day, Christmas day. Since
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i
want to
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buy
this shoulder
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bag
,
Did you mean "I"?
i
can
easily
carry my needy things.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
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i
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have to
go somewhere.

IELTS essay Describe a bag you want to own. You should say: what kind of bag it is where you want to buy it how much it will cost you and explain why you want this kind of bag.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
202 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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