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Some people think that teachers should give advice to schoolchildren which profession to choose. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? State your opinion and support it with reasons and examples.

Some people think that teachers should give advice to schoolchildren which profession to choose. with this opinion? State your opinion and support it with reasons and examples. aqboV
Teachers can make a difference. Their words matter. From my point of view, teachers know much about our abilities and can give us vital advice. A teacher affects eternity: he can never tell where his influence stops. Firstly, The best teachers are the ones that change their minds. I strongly believe that teachers can help their students establish themselves in this competitive era. Their influence is vital in any circumstances, for instance, my brother's English teacher is always a motivator for everyone. Secondly, teachers have relationships and communications with a lot of students and they can accurately assess people’s capabilities, qualities, and needs. Furthermore, teachers are the best advisors for any child and they shape our childhood. Also, I want to analyze the two sides of the coin and say that not all teachers can give proper advice. All in from what I discussed above I strongly hold that teachers can always help us due to its complexity and they always can make something beneficial for pupils.
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teachers
know much about our abilities and can give us vital advice. A
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teacher
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where his influence
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their minds. I
strongly
believe that
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teachers
can
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their students establish themselves in this competitive era. Their influence is vital in any circumstances,
for instance
, my brother's English
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teacher
is always a motivator for everyone.
Secondly
,
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teachers
have relationships and communications with
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a lot of
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students and
they can
accurately
assess
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people
’s capabilities, qualities, and needs.
Furthermore
,
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teachers
are the best advisors for any
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child and
they shape our childhood.
Also
, I want to analyze the two sides of the coin and say that not all
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teachers
can give proper advice. All in from what I discussed above I
strongly
hold that
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teachers
can always
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help
us due to its
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complexity and
they always can
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make
something beneficial for pupils.
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IELTS essay Some people think that teachers should give advice to schoolchildren which profession to choose. with this opinion? State your opinion and support it with reasons and examples.

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