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Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons. v.1

Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Give reasons. v. 1
Nowadays, the number of fast food all over the world is increasing. Some people think that it has bad effects, others find positive sides. I think, it has effects on our lifestyle and diet, but if people visit fast food, they should choose a healthy meal. However, sometimes it is difficult to avoid junk food. On the one hand, everybody knows that eat regularly fast food is not good. However, many people still eat it. One of them because they like it, others do not have any free time to have a healthy lunch. Of course, it has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. I suggest, the problem of overweight is the biggest one in the modern world. Therefore, nutritionist do not recommend include in daily diet any fast food. Moreover, majority children like junk and unhealthy food, so adults should pay attention to avoid them of tasty, but unhealthy food. On the other hand, recently, fast food restaurants became to include in menu healthy meal such as green salads, soups, fresh juices and dairy products. Of course, it is difficult to reduce junk food from daily diet for them who have eaten it years. However, today everybody can choose what they prefer more; for example, do not have overweight problems or eat unhealthy food. I think, if people choose a good meal, they will not have any problems and it can be an excellent example for their children. At the same time, fast food restaurants have good coffee machines; for example, people can order a coffee without any junk food. In conclusion, no doubt fast food has influence on health. However, everybody can choose what meal they will order there.
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all over the world is increasing.
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effects, others find
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sides. I
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, it has effects on our lifestyle and diet,
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people
visit
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, they should
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choose
a healthy
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meal
.
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,
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sometimes
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food.

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is not
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they like it, others do not have any free time to have a healthy lunch.
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, it has
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effects in lifestyle and diet. I suggest, the problem of overweight is the biggest one in the modern world.
Therefore
, nutritionist do not recommend include in daily diet any
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food
.
Moreover
, majority children like
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and unhealthy
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,
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adults should pay attention to avoid them of tasty,
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unhealthy food.

On the other hand
, recently,
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restaurants became to include in menu healthy
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meal
such as green salads, soups, fresh juices and dairy products.
Of course
, it is difficult to
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junk
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from daily diet for them who have eaten it years.
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,
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everybody can
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what they prefer more;
for example
, do not have overweight problems or eat unhealthy
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food
. I
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, they will not have any problems and it can be an excellent example for their children. At the same time,
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fast
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restaurants have
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coffee machines;
for example
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can order a coffee without any
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In conclusion
, no doubt
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has influence on health.
However
, everybody can
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choose
what
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meal
they will order there.
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IELTS essay Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Give reasons. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
281 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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