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Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in. v.10

Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in. v. 10
I do not agree with the opinion that we should completely avoid the fashion trend but I do agree with it up to a certain extent. Fashion trend in our clothes has reached a level of craziness now. I find it bizarre to follow the latest fashion trends these days from a normal man's perspective. It's gone a level out of hand, according to me. You simply can't dress up to the trends in the fashion world these days and expect to lead a normal life. For me, fashion is about being you and giving a picture of yourself or I say portraying yourself to the world. It's not about following someone or what people do. It's more of your own personal thing rather than adapting someone's style completely, as the fashion trend right now is that. For me being yourself and dressing up what you think suits you the best and being comfortable physically and mentally but at the same time looking good and presentable to the outside world. It's a hard task getting all the combinations right. Maybe I'm a fashionable person, as I get appreciated most times which made me feel that fashion is just about being yourself and not always about following the existing trend. Some might disagree. I say set your own trends. I completely disagree that it's widely believed that fashion trends exist just to sell off clothes. Fashion trends are like innovation and ideas. They keep changing and they keep moving ahead, a step ahead than most of us in my opinion. If the world was following the same trend then boredom would have set in. Fashion trends give you new ideas and innovations in the world of fashion but it’s just up to you to decide whether you have to try it or ignore it. It's not about following it but picking the right ones from various combinations of right and wrongs.
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in our clothes has reached a level of craziness
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. I find it bizarre to follow the latest
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trends
these days from a normal
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man
's perspective.

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simply
can't dress up to the
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trends
in the
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fashion
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world
these days and
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expect
to lead a normal life. For me,
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fashion
is about being you and giving a picture of yourself or I say portraying yourself to the
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world
.
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following
someone or what
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do.
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more of your
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own
personal thing
rather
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fashion
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right
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is that. For me being yourself and dressing up what you
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think
suits you the best and being comfortable
physically
and mentally
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at the same time looking
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good
and presentable to the outside
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world
.
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a
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task getting all the combinations
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. Maybe I'm a fashionable person, as I
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appreciated most times which made me feel that
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is
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just
about being yourself and not always about
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following
the existing
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.
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might disagree. I say set your
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trends.

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believed that
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fashion
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exist
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just
to sell off clothes.
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are like innovation and
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ideas
. They
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keep
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changing and
they
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moving ahead, a step
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ahead
than most of us in my opinion. If the
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was
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the same
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then boredom would have set in.
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give you new
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ideas
and innovations in the
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of
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try it or
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it.
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it
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picking the
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right
ones from various combinations of
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right
and wrongs.
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IELTS essay Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in. v. 10

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
320 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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