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Farming is the backbone of a nation but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession. why is this case and what are the solutions for this issue ?

Farming is the backbone of a nation but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession. why is this case and what are the solutions for this issue? KnBE3
Agriculture not only leads a country on the track of prosperity but also a valuable source to boost the economy of a nation. Despite this, the youth of a nation almost denying it as a career. There are some reasons behind this, such as less usage of Technology for this work, old-fashioned profession and so on. This essay will discuss main obstacles in detail and relevant solutions to tackle this issue. The most prominent reason why youth is lacking interest in farming is that most of the youngsters adore to keep themselves in touch of technology. To expand it, agriculture is mostly considered as old fashioned profession because it doesn't allow a person to keep themselves in the comfort of Technology. In other words, this profession, however, need manually backbreaking efforts and youth feel afraid of it. Moreover, peasants do not have safety related to their incomes incase of natural disasters; that are totally unpredictable, catastrope their crops, in that situations they have to face that hindrances even they do not get any incentive that can help them. So, due to these hardships youth keep away from this profession. On the other hand, agriculture profession can regain ground if possible steps could be taken. Firstly, the introduction of convenient technology equipment for example, drane pest spraying, tilling and pulling of land with computerized methods and can really contribute to empower it really empower it. Furthermore, such gadgets need only supervision rather than manpower, as a result youngsters would like it. Secondly, giving farmers annually rewards incentives and special aid due to natural calamities is another most effective way to alleviate this problem. This kind of extra appreciation enhance one's courage and boost confidence for their profession. So, by using these methods youngsters can prefer this occupation. In conclusion, all the youngsters are losing their interaction to be a farmer, given methods can definitely give repopulance and redevelopment it.
Agriculture not
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only
leads a country on the
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track
of prosperity
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but
also
a valuable source to boost the economy of a nation. Despite this, the
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youth
of a nation almost denying it as a career. There are
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some
reasons behind this, such as less usage of
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Technology
for this work,
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old
-fashioned
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profession
and
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so
on. This essay will discuss main obstacles in detail and relevant solutions to tackle this issue. The most prominent reason why
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youth
is lacking interest in farming is that most of the youngsters adore to
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keep
themselves in touch of
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technology
. To expand it, agriculture is
mostly
considered as
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old fashioned
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profession
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because
it doesn't
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allow
a person to
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keep
themselves in the comfort of
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Technology
.
In other words
, this
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profession
,
however
, need
manually
backbreaking efforts and
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youth
feel afraid of it.
Moreover
, peasants do not have safety related to their incomes
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incase of
natural disasters; that are
totally
unpredictable,
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catastrope
their crops, in that situations they
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have to
face that hindrances even they do not
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get
any incentive that can
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help
them.
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So
, due to these
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hardships
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youth
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keep
away from this profession.

On the other hand
, agriculture
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profession
can regain ground if possible steps could
be taken
.
Firstly
, the introduction of convenient
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technology
equipment
for example
,
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drane
pest spraying, tilling and pulling of land with computerized methods and can
really
contribute to empower it
really
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empower
it.
Furthermore
, such gadgets need
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
supervision
rather
than manpower,
as a result
youngsters would like it.
Secondly
, giving farmers
annually
rewards incentives and special aid due to natural calamities is another most effective way to alleviate this problem. This kind of extra appreciation enhance one's courage and boost confidence for their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
profession
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, by using these methods youngsters can prefer this occupation.

In conclusion
, all the youngsters are losing their interaction to be a farmer,
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given
methods can definitely give
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repopulance
and redevelopment it.
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IELTS essay Farming is the backbone of a nation but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession. why is this case and what are the solutions for this issue?

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