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Famous athletes deserve high incomes

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Athletes are paid a large sum of money, which can amount to millions of dollars per year. Even if we had been earning that much for years, it would not have been enough. So, do they really deserve such a high salary? They certainly deserve it, in my opinion. The reason for my selection is that athletes contribute significantly to earning honour for their countries. Essentially, when athletes win gold medals, they contribute significantly to the reputation of their respective countries. As a result, they are deserving of a high reward, such as good pay. Furthermore, famous athletes do not just play during their season; they must train all year or risk losing their job. They bound to lose something to get what they want. For example, almost all athletes sustain injuries as a result of rigorous training and physical competition to win the game. As the old adage goes, "no pains, no gain. " Furthermore, sports necessitate a high level of dedication as well as a strong mental fortitude. Many people are unaware that becoming an athlete is more difficult than any other type of work. Athletes must be fit in order to play games for long periods of time. They unquestionably deserve their high salary. Famous athletes, in my opinion, are well-deserving of their big pay. They put in the same amount of effort as everyone else.

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