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Family relationships have the most influence on children

Family relationships have the most influence on children XqE2P
Children first learn about relationships from their own families. Families give them a model from which they start to discover how to build relationships throughout their lives. Children who have a model of healthy relationships from their families are better able to create these relationships outside their families, with the other children and adults in their lives. When children learn the skills of building positive relationships, they can practise these skills over and over again as they meet new people. For example, when parents say "thank you" to children when they help out, then children are more likely to say "thank you" when their peers or other adults do something for them. A warm and safe family environment helps children develop and gives them confidence to explore their world, try new things and learn. Beside, family members feel secure and loved, when they know that their family members love and will protect one another. Good family relationships make it easier to solve any likely problems, resolve conflict and respect differences of opinion in a cordial way.
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learn about
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relationships
from their
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families
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give them a model from which they
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start
to discover how to build
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relationships
throughout their
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lives
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Children
who have a model of healthy
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relationships
from their
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families
are better able to create these
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relationships
outside their
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families
, with the other
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children
and adults in their
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lives
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children
learn the
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skills
of building
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positive
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relationships
, they can
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skills
over and over again as they
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meet
new
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people
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, when parents say
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thank you
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to
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children
when they
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children
are more likely to say
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thank you
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when their peers or other adults do something for them. A warm and safe
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family
environment
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helps
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children
develop and gives them confidence to explore their world, try new things and learn.

Beside,
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family
members feel secure and
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loved
, when they know that their
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family
members
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love
and will protect one another.
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Good
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family
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relationships
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it easier to solve any likely problems, resolve conflict and respect differences of opinion
Consider replacing "in a cordial way" with the adverb for "cordial"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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IELTS essay Family relationships have the most influence on children

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
176 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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