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Advantages and disadvantages of newspapers

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They provide you with all the current information which can improve the reader’s knowledge-base It takes you a much time to read newspaper and magazine. However, it is not as effective as other advertisement sources They are convenience and cheap in cost compared to other advertisement sources so anyone can buy They have shorter shelf life than many other media sources because of quality of the paper is so poor Newspaper and Magazine are easy to recycle. People can make different crafts from the newspaper such as: flower, kite, … Sometimes, the news in some newspapers which is shown is false to attract many people.
They provide you with all the
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information which can
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a much
time to read newspaper and magazine.
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, it is not as effective as other advertisement sources

They are convenience and
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cheap
in cost compared to other advertisement sources
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anyone can
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buy
They have shorter shelf life than
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many
other media sources
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because
of quality of the paper is
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so
poor

Newspaper and Magazine are easy to recycle.
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People
can
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make
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different
crafts from the newspaper such as: flower, kite, …
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Sometimes
, the news in
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some
newspapers which
is shown
is false to attract
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many
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people
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IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantages of newspapers

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
104 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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