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Family expenditure about my family

Family expenditure about my family KVGA6

I'm talking about my family expenditure. Firstly i could say that every year 2000 dollar spending just for school or college transport. Though it is huge amount but my family easily manage these. My father is the only person who are managing expenses for our family. Actually, every father manages these but my father never tried to rest on about this because he knows well how to control a family that in my family any other persons have no idea about this.

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 expenditure. Firstly
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 could say that every year 2000 dollar spending This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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family
easily
 manage these. My father is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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 person who are managing expenses for our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
. Actually, every father manages these This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 my father never tried to rest on about this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he knows well how to control a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 that in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 any other persons have no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
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