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Family celebrations. How do you celebrate in your family

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I usually celebrate holidays with my big family and my friends. This is always a great celebration. I like when we get together but most of all I like to choose presents for each member of our family. I can see that my gifts make them happier because I know what they want to get. I think that family celebrations are very important in human life also this event is memorable and pleasant time for every person.

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 most of all I like to choose presents for each member of our family. I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
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 is memorable and pleasant time for every person. 