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[4/5, 8:02 PM] kmary8629: Okay [4/5, 10:43 PM] kmary8629: Answer It is obvious that notorious events like football world cup as well as other international sporting activities plays an important role in reducing tension internationally and also contribute to inter country support in a safe way. I strongly agree with this statement because sport plays an important part in a country intertwinement and also strengthen the bond between nations. To begin,sporting activities has been in existence since our four fathers days. they joy that accompany sport cannot be underestimated. However, football world cup contributes greatly to the entertainment sector of a given country because it has it way of uplifting the viewers spirits and fans are usually very excited when their team wins. Example can be seen in the ongoing India champion league where fans will go hungry to to watch their team play and get furious when they loose. Never the less,it is safe to say that field events like foo

[4/5, 8: 02 PM] kmary8629: Okay [4/5, 10: 43 PM] kmary8629: Answer It is obvious that notorious events like football world cup as well as other international sporting activities plays an important role in reducing tension internationally and also contribute to inter country support in a safe way. I strongly agree with this statement because sport plays an important part in a country intertwinement and also strengthen the bond between nations. To begin, sporting activities has been in existence since our four fathers days. they joy that accompany sport cannot be underestimated. However, football world cup contributes greatly to the entertainment sector of a given country because it has it way of uplifting the viewers spirits and fans are usually very excited when their team wins. Example can be seen in the ongoing India champion league where fans will go hungry to to watch their team play and get furious when they loose. Never the less, it is safe to say that field events like foo E3ljx
It is obvious that notorious events like football world cup as well as other international sporting activities plays an important role in reducing tension internationally and also contribute to inter country support in a safe way. I strongly agree with this statement because sport plays an important part in a country intertwinement and also strengthen the bond between nations. To begin, sporting activities has been in existence since our four fathers days. they joy that accompany sport cannot be underestimated. However, football world cup contributes greatly to the entertainment sector of a given country because it has it way of uplifting the viewers spirits and fans are usually very excited when their team wins. Example can be seen in the ongoing India champion league where fans will go hungry to to watch their team play and get furious when they loose. Never the less, it is safe to say that field events like foot ball or any other sport has an emotional connection with their viewers and a large number of people watching sport and the get entertained in the process. Secondly, football play internationally has a way of strengthening the bond between nation which will in turn encourage support between the nations. this I because, different individuals from different countries Come into play in one space. Although it I'd usually a competition this event create avenue for interactions between the sport men. events like friendly match is said to foster closeness within the said nations. for example, the match between Albinia and kosovo in 2020 gave the players avenue to know themselves and the host nations made their visitors comfortable. In conclusion, international sport is necessary in relieving the stress posed on countries from other sectors like economic. this is because the viewers get entertained in the process and also make countries closer to each other for this reasons, I strongly agree to this statement.
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intertwinement
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excited when their team wins. Example can be
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has an emotional connection with their viewers and
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events
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kosovo
in 2020 gave the players avenue to know themselves and the host
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made their visitors comfortable.

In conclusion
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is necessary in relieving the
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the viewers
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IELTS essay [4/5, 8: 02 PM] kmary8629: Okay [4/5, 10: 43 PM] kmary8629: Answer It is obvious that notorious events like football world cup as well as other international sporting activities plays an important role in reducing tension internationally and also contribute to inter country support in a safe way. I strongly agree with this statement because sport plays an important part in a country intertwinement and also strengthen the bond between nations. To begin, sporting activities has been in existence since our four fathers days. they joy that accompany sport cannot be underestimated. However, football world cup contributes greatly to the entertainment sector of a given country because it has it way of uplifting the viewers spirits and fans are usually very excited when their team wins. Example can be seen in the ongoing India champion league where fans will go hungry to to watch their team play and get furious when they loose. Never the less, it is safe to say that field events like foo

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