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Failure is a proof that desire wasnot strong enough

It is alleged that temptation is leading failure because of inadequate level of less passion and invalidation. In this essay, I disagree with these impractical consequences of views that when only desire wasnot solid enough, failure occurs. To begin with, it can be said that the case of failure is an integral part of achieving success, while only gravest regulation which leads failure, comes from inadequate desire. This means that if desire contributes to strand of achievement, as opposed to unaffordable context of failure might be temporarily weak aspiration. Example can be seen in students who are preparing to higher education with less desire, this disrupts to achieve success. However, it is universal consensus that desire with painfull greeds, passion and with strong work capability never undergo to failure. Furthermore, commentators of this viewpoint is that failure might be hold by other aspects of proofs, including both finacially and physically except weak desire. In addition, it would appear that unaffordable contents of common failures might be prompt to counteract against all barriers. In other words, strand case of failure is obstacle which climbs wall of success. Another argument is the way of failure to direct to the emotional support which the majority of students can take a power from it the way of achievement. In conclusion, it is apparent that with weak desire, students could no longer go far to the way of achieving success. Nevertheless, if desire strong enought with other aspects of remedies to failure might be prompt to overcome difficulties.
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,
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is an integral part of achieving
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, while
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gravest regulation which leads
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,
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from inadequate
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. This means that if
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contributes to strand of achievement, as opposed to unaffordable context of
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failure
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be
temporarily
weak aspiration. Example can be
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seen
in students who are preparing to higher education with less
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desire
, this disrupts to achieve
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success
.
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, it is universal consensus that
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with
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painfull
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greeds
, passion and with strong work capability never undergo to
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.
Furthermore
, commentators of this viewpoint is that
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might
be hold by other aspects of proofs, including both
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finacially
and
physically
except weak
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desire
.
In addition
, it would appear that unaffordable contents of common
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failures
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might
be prompt to counteract against all barriers.
In other words
, strand case of
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failure
is obstacle which climbs wall of
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success
. Another argument is the way of
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failure
to direct to the emotional support which the majority of students can take a power from it the way of achievement.
In conclusion
, it is apparent that with weak
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desire
, students could no longer go far to the way of achieving
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success
.
Nevertheless
, if
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strong
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enought
with other aspects of remedies to
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might
be prompt to overcome difficulties.
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IELTS essay Failure is a proof that desire wasnot strong enough

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
253 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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