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FACULTY SPORT FESTIVAL Team Leader of volleyball club -Take part in and support teammates when competing GREEN SUMMER VOLUNTEER CAMPAIGN Volunteer -Teaching and supporting children to have the opportunity to learn English THE CHARITY ACTIVITY TOWARDS THE CENTRAL Group Leader 3/2019 - 4/2019 7/2020 - 08/2020 9/2020 - 11/2020 -Organize and plan to give gifts to people in the difficult flood areas in Quang Nam and Quang Tri

FACULTY SPORT FESTIVAL Team Leader of volleyball club -Take part in and support teammates when competing GREEN SUMMER VOLUNTEER CAMPAIGN Volunteer -Teaching and supporting children to have the opportunity to learn English THE CHARITY ACTIVITY TOWARDS THE CENTRAL Group Leader 3/2019 - 4/2019 7/2020 - 08/2020 9/2020 - 11/2020 -Organize and plan to give gifts to people in the difficult flood areas in Quang Nam and Quang Tri JLlj6
FACULTY SPORT FESTIVAL Team Leader of volleyball club -Take part in and support teammates when competing GREEN SUMMER VOLUNTEER CAMPAIGN Volunteer -Teaching and supporting children to have the opportunity to learn English THE CHARITY ACTIVITY TOWARDS THE CENTRAL Group Leader 3/2019 - 4/2019 7/2020 - 08/2020 9/2020 - 11/2020 -Organize and plan to give gifts to people in the difficult flood areas in Quang Nam and Quang Tri
FACULTY SPORT FESTIVAL

Team Leader of volleyball club

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Take part
in and support teammates when competing

GREEN SUMMER VOLUNTEER CAMPAIGN

Volunteer

-Teaching and supporting children to have the opportunity to learn English

THE CHARITY ACTIVITY TOWARDS THE CENTRAL

Group Leader

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2019 - 4
/2019

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2020 - 08
/2020

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2020 - 11
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-Organize and plan to give gifts to
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people
in the difficult flood areas in
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Quang
Nam and
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Quang
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Tri
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IELTS essay FACULTY SPORT FESTIVAL Team Leader of volleyball club -Take part in and support teammates when competing GREEN SUMMER VOLUNTEER CAMPAIGN Volunteer -Teaching and supporting children to have the opportunity to learn English THE CHARITY ACTIVITY TOWARDS THE CENTRAL Group Leader 3/2019 - 4/2019 7/2020 - 08/2020 9/2020 - 11/2020 -Organize and plan to give gifts to people in the difficult flood areas in Quang Nam and Quang Tri

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