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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, e-mail or telepohone calls. use spesific reasons and details to support your answer.

Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, e-mail or telepohone calls. use spesific reasons and details to support your answer. P63J
Communication has been known since 2 thousand years ago. That year, people communicated with other people through the draw. People didn’t know how to talk. They used symbol as the way they talked with another people. Nowadays, time has changed. The techonolgy more sophisticate than before. We can talk with other people in a long distance. We can use telephone, email, or letter to send the message that we want to say. In a good condition, we don’t have to walk out to meet them (the people that we want to talk to). We can only use telephone or email to send a message. Moreover, the time that we spend more efficient. Not only about the time, but also we can prepare what we are going to say to them. So it decrases some mistakes when we are talking. We can also find the interest topic to discuss, maybe when the news show in our handphone we can use that as a topic that we want to discuss. In a contrast side, it will make many misscommunications. Because, some part of the text that we give to them will not understand. They will achieve the message in many different types. For example, when someone says ‘Ya’ some people will think he/she is angry to them. Although, people have a lot of different styles of typing. Some of them will type as short as possible, so they spend less time than have to write for a long text. They also will get in to their comfort zone. The people will find many answers so they don’t have to walk out to meet them. It will give the bad impact for our healthy. In my opinion, i would like to go out to meet the opponent talk. I like face-to-face communication rather than e-mail or other online communcations. Phone call or video call still better for me because we can give the clear intonation, so they will understand what we wanna say to them. I can also give the gesture to make it clearer.
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been known
since 2 thousand years ago. That year,
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people
communicated with other
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people
through the draw.
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didn’t know how to
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talk
. They
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used
symbol as the way they talked with another
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people
. Nowadays,
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time
has
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changed
. The
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techonolgy
more sophisticate than
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before
. We can
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talk
with other
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people
in a long distance. We can
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use
telephone, email, or letter to
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send
the message that we want to say.

In a
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good
condition, we don’t
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have to
walk out to
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meet
them (the
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people
that we want to
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talk
to). We can
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only
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use
telephone or email to
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send
a message.
Moreover
, the
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time
that we spend more efficient. Not
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only
about the
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time
,
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also
we can prepare what we are going to say to them.
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it
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decrases
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some
mistakes when we are talking. We can
also
find the interest topic to discuss, maybe when the news
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show
in our
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handphone
we can
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use
that as a topic that we want to discuss.

In a contrast side, it will
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make
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many
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misscommunications
.
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,
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some
part of the text that we
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give
to them will not understand. They will achieve the message in
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many
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different
types.
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, when someone says ‘Ya’
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some
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people
will
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think
he/she is angry to them.
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,
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people
have
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a lot of
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different
styles of typing.
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Some
of them will type as short as possible,
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so
they spend less
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time
than
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have to
write for a long text. They
also
will
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get
in to their comfort zone. The
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people
will find
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many
answers
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so
they don’t
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have to
walk out to
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meet
them. It will
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give
the
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bad
impact for our healthy.

In my opinion,
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i
would like to go out to
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meet
the opponent
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talk
. I like face-to-face communication
rather
than e-mail or other online
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communcations
. Phone call or video call
still
better for me
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because
we can
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give
the
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clear
intonation,
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so
they will understand what we
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wanna
say to them. I can
also
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give
the gesture to
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make
it clearer.
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IELTS essay Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, e-mail or telepohone calls. use spesific reasons and details to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
342 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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