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Eyeglasses or contact lenses: that is the question

Eyeglasses or contact lenses: that is the question YLDG5
Many people in the world may have trouble seeing picturesque views without their eyeglasses on. For the majority of senior citizens, the objects could look so blurred without their eyeglasses. Also, children born with inborn vision problems should wear spectacles for a long time. But sometimes one may prefer or even be forced to use contact lenses instead of eyeglasses. The nose surgery, playing some sport like volleyball, and go to a party are some of those reasons. Though glasses are so useful and necessary, they may not be very easy to handle. People may leave or lose them. They may also get smashed or simply fog up in inclement weather, e. g. on a rainy or snowy day. So it sounds would be a good idea to replace eyeglasses with contact lenses. Contact lenses, in turn, need to be taken care of. First of all, it is very important to be aware of potential allergies caused by them. They also have an expiry date that needs to be checked as well. The contact lenses may be used after minor eye surgeries. In that case, you need to take the ophthalmologist’s prescription seriously and follow it step by step as it is essential. Although the contact lenses Anyway, the preference in this regard is definitely with the end-user. Finally, both contact lenses and eyeglasses are necessary for those who need to see the world around them better.
Many
people
in the world may have trouble seeing picturesque views without their
eyeglasses
on. For the majority of senior citizens, the objects could look
so
blurred without their
eyeglasses
.
Also
, children born with inborn vision problems should wear spectacles for a long time.
But
sometimes
one may prefer or even
be forced
to
use
contact
lenses
instead
of
eyeglasses
. The nose surgery, playing
some
sport
like volleyball, and go to a party are
some
of those reasons.

Though glasses are
so
useful and necessary, they may not be
very
easy to handle.
People
may
leave
or lose them. They may
also
get
smashed or
simply
fog up in inclement weather,
e. g.
on a rainy or snowy day.
So
it sounds would be a
good
idea
to replace
eyeglasses
with
contact
lenses.

Contact
lenses
, in turn,
need
to
be taken
care of.
First of all
, it is
very
important
to be aware of potential allergies caused by them. They
also
have an expiry date that
needs
to be
checked
as well
. The
contact
lenses
may be
used
after minor eye surgeries.
In that case
, you
need
to take the ophthalmologist’s prescription
seriously
and follow it step by step as it is essential. Although the
contact
lenses


Anyway, the preference in this regard is definitely with the
end
-user.
Finally
, both
contact
lenses
and
eyeglasses
are necessary for those who
need
to
see
the world around them better.
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IELTS essay Eyeglasses or contact lenses: that is the question

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
237 words
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