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Extension of joining date

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Thank you for the offer of employment by your esteemed organisation as a User Experience Engineering Senior Analyst. I am delighted to receive your kind offer, and I gladly accept the offered position. However, due to my real sister's wedding functions, I will not be able to report to work on your requested date i. e. 18th October 2021. My sisters' engagement ceremony will take place on 17th October 2021, the wedding ceremony is on 14th Nov 2021 and lastly reception on 15th Nov 2021. Given the above, I request you extend my date of joining to 16th November 2021. I seek this extension as I would not like to embarrass myself by asking for leave immediately after taking a fresh job. Generally, job candidates join on Monday, but I am requesting to join on Tuesday because I will remain busy in post-marital logistic management on Monday. Hence, may I humbly request an extension of the commencement date at your organisation, of which I am very keen to be part? Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks & Regards, Prayas Ahuja

Thank you for the offer of employment by your esteemed Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
 as a User Experience Engineering Senior Analyst. I am delighted
 to receive your kind offer, and I gladly
 accept the offered position.

However
, due to my real sister's wedding functions, I will not be able to report to work on your requested date There should be no space here: "i.e.".i.e.
i. e.
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
18th October 2021
. My sisters' engagement ceremony will take place on 17th October 2021, the wedding ceremony is on 14th Nov 2021 and lastly
 reception on 15th Nov 2021.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
Given
 the above, I request you extend my date of joining to 16th November 2021. I seek this extension as I would not like to embarrass myself by asking for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 immediately after taking a fresh job. Generally
, job candidates This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 on Monday, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I am requesting to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 on Tuesday This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I will remain busy in post-marital logistic management on Monday.

Hence
, may I humbly
 request an extension of the commencement date at your Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
, of which I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 keen to be part? Looking forward to hearing from you.

Thanks & Regards,

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Prayas
Possible spelling mistake found.Abuja
Ahuja