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exposure to international media like T.V, flims, magazines etc, has had significant impact on local culture. Do advantages overwright the disadvantages.

exposure to international media like T. V, flims, magazines etc, has had significant impact on local culture. Do advantages overwright the disadvantages. dolmX
Media is a place where everything is to be expose with everyone whether is it beneficial or hazardeous, while, in current days the media like T. V, flims any many more which all have higher influence on our local folks, whereas it has some great amount of positive impacts, somehow it has other repercussions too, in following essay it will elaborated in following paragraphs. To embark with it advantages, the first is that by using it one can get instant news no matter of which corner it comes, we can get any news of any field on media which contain all the details of that particular incident. In addition, the connectivity with other culture plays pivotal role in our local masses and it has huge positive outcomes: expansion of knowlwgde, higher education and understanding of others culture and tradition, helpful to get idea of histroy of others. For instance, in one college the students of science stream who all were willing to get the truth behind the success of 'Mission Mangal', fortunatley, the film was produce on it so, by the dint of it students became to know about the story of that mission which can be taken as an epitome. Another point to be consider about the same situatuin is that, if any person want any creative idea, thoughts so, from here one can get easiyl and it can be applied on their new creative work. Moreover, as a influence of others culture the local people become to follow their lifestyle which ultimately convert their lifestyle and they can easily developed their living quality of life, while it comes to in educational sector the media is one of the biggest weapon to improve the quality of one particular board by following the foreign education system. To cite an example, the state university of Gujarat follows the exam method which is same in University of Cambridge. Nonetheless, as every coin has its two sides, in same way media has also two sides, media is culpable for some ramifications which are deleterious for our culture, when the teenagers start following the trend they might have some unusual outcomes. They change their behaviour towards their ancestors and that situation is against of our traditional culture. To exemplify, the survey conducted in one school that, the usage of media is been increased in students, they become uncontrolled from their parents amd it all due to social media. To conclude, althought, media has vast sources of knowledge for every kind of person and which all are ubiquitous, somehow they all have some negative impacts too.
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Media
is a place where everything is to be
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expose
with everyone whether is it beneficial or
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hazardeous
, while, in
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current
days the
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media
like T. V,
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flims
any
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many
more which all have higher influence on our local folks, whereas it has
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some
great amount of
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positive
impacts, somehow it has
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other
repercussions too, in
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following
essay it will
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elaborated
in
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following
paragraphs.

To embark with it advantages, the
first
is that by using it one can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
instant news no matter of which corner it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
any news of any field on
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media
which contain all the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of that particular incident.
In addition
, the connectivity with
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other
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culture
plays pivotal role in our local masses and it has huge
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
outcomes: expansion of
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knowlwgde
, higher education and understanding of others
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culture
and tradition, helpful to
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get
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idea
of
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histroy
of others.
For instance
, in one college the students of science stream who all were willing to
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get
the truth behind the success of 'Mission
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Mangal
',
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fortunatley
, the film was produce on it
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so
, by the dint of
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it students
became to know about the story of that mission which can
be taken
as an epitome.

Another point to be
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consider about the
same
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situatuin
is that, if any person want any creative
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idea
, thoughts
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so
, from here one can
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get
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easiyl
and it can
be applied
on their new creative work.
Moreover
, as
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a
influence of others
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culture
the local
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people
become to follow their lifestyle which
ultimately
convert their
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lifestyle and
they can
easily
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developed
their living quality of life, while it
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comes
to in educational sector the
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media
is one of the biggest weapon to
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improve
the quality of one particular board by
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following
the foreign education system. To cite an example, the state university of Gujarat follows the exam method which is same in University of Cambridge.

Nonetheless, as every coin has its two sides, in same way
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media
has
also
two sides,
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media
is culpable for
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some
ramifications which are deleterious for our
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culture
, when the
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teenagers
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start
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following
the trend they might have
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some
unusual outcomes. They
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change
their
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behaviour
towards their ancestors and that situation is against of our traditional
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culture
. To exemplify, the survey conducted in one school that, the usage of
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media
is been
increased in students, they become uncontrolled from their parents
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amd
it all due to social media.

To conclude
,
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althought
,
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media
has vast sources of knowledge for every kind of person and which all are ubiquitous, somehow they all have
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some
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negative
impacts too.
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IELTS essay exposure to international media like T. V, flims, magazines etc, has had significant impact on local culture. Do advantages overwright the disadvantages.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
431 words
6.0
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