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Explain to your personality

Explain to your personality LG9e1
Everyone has their own personality that differs. However, many people also have similar habit or personality, some people is introvert and there also has others people that is extrovert, but some people also be both introvert and extrovert like me or you can call them ambivert person. I have many habit that I have not said so I will talk about my 3 parts of my personality that are mind, energy, and identity. Part of mind, from the website of 16 personalities it told me that I am a extraverted person but for now I think I am ambivert person. Because it had many times I felt would like to take time with myself but at the same time I also frequently would like to have a participate, activity with others so this is the reason why I think I am ambivert. Part of energy, I have more percent of observant than intuitive because when I have to decide something or do a future plan I always realize to reality because in my opinion I think we have to be with reality more than imagination, but I did not mean we can not have imagination or dream. You can have it I think it such a good thing, but it also have to base on reality. Part of identity, I am the one who is confident and assertive, but just the things that I am really good at such as dancing, singing, music, video editing, etc. If someone request me to have the decision about something that is other than what i am good at so I will always nervous and unsure. I believe that many people do not like some their habits or personality, I am the one. Which if that is a habit that effects in a bad way to others we should modify it. But if that is a habit that is yourself, then some people do not like you for no reason, just let them away and be yourself.
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IELTS essay Explain to your personality

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
333 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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