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Explain the concept of impression management, using the examples provided by the professor. v.1

Explain the concept of impression management, using the examples provided by the professor. v. 1
It is a common belief that the attire of a person reflects a lot of information. Many people argue that a person’s culture and character can be predicted by one’s choice of clothes. I agree that clothes can implicate a person’s culture, but I don’t believe that character can be judged by the way people dress up. It is a well-known fact that people from different regions dress up differently, and the majority of these dresses are heavily influenced by the culture of that particular region. Many people prefer to follow a common dress code which is appreciated in their ethnicity or region. For example, Muslim women prefer to wear a veil to cover their heads and bodies. Furthermore, Pakistani women prefer to wear a particular style of shirt and a trouser which reflects the Pakistani culture. By looking at this unique way of dressing or covering the body, one can easily predict their culture and religion. Therefore, culture and the way people dress up are strongly interlinked. Character, however, is the moral and mental thinking of an individual which has no link with the way people dress up. Personal character is a completely distinctive quality. A group of people living in the same community and sharing the same patterns of clothing, culture, profession, and religion can have different types of characters. For example, in a country a criminal and a common man could be wearing the same dress while their actions and mentality could be completely different from each other. Therefore, it is hardly possible to predict one’s character from the way a person dresses up. In conclusion, the culture of a person can indeed be predicted by looking at one’s attire, but it’s impossible to predict the character of a person just by the choice of clothes.
It is a common belief that the attire of a
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people
argue that a
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culture
and
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character
can
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by one’s choice of clothes. I
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agree
that clothes can implicate a
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person’s
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culture
,
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but
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character
can
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people
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dress
up.

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people
from
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different
regions
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dress
up
differently
, and the majority of these
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dresses
are
heavily
influenced by the
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culture
of that particular region.
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Many
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people
prefer to follow a common
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dress
code which
is appreciated
in their ethnicity or region.
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, Muslim women prefer to wear a veil to cover their heads and bodies.
Furthermore
, Pakistani women prefer to wear a particular style of shirt and a trouser which reflects the Pakistani
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culture
. By looking at this unique way of dressing or covering the body, one can
easily
predict their
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culture
and religion.
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,
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culture
and the way
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people
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dress
up are
strongly
interlinked.

Character,
however
, is the moral and mental thinking of an individual which has no link with the way
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people
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dress
up. Personal
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character
is a completely distinctive quality. A group of
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people
living in the same community and sharing the same patterns of clothing,
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culture
, profession, and religion can have
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different
types of
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characters
.
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, in a country a criminal and a common
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man
could be wearing the same
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dress
while their actions and mentality could be completely
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different
from each other.
Therefore
, it is hardly possible to predict one’s
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character
from the way a
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person
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dresses
up.

In conclusion
, the
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culture
of a
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person
can
indeed
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by looking at one’s attire,
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but
it’s impossible to predict the
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character
of a
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person
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just
by the choice of clothes.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Explain the concept of impression management, using the examples provided by the professor. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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