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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment.

Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. R27XG
Air pollution, soil pollution, water pollution are some of the ways that humans are damaging the environment. Due to rapid industrialization and modernization, the environment has been enduring excessive harm from various sources such as: domestic trash, industrial trash, unprocessed waste (including solid and liquid waste). These kinds of waste are the main causes for damaging the environment. The harmful smoke from industrial companies, gas from means of transportation and people’s burning rubbish can destroy the atmosphere. Burying rubbish is the same, especially plastic wastes, they need a long time to decompose and that process will make soil less rich. Otherwise, wastes thrown directly into lakes or rivers, which consequently cause water pollution. Take Ganges River in India as an example, people throw almost all of the waste there, even corpses. As a result, water here is more and more seriously contaminated which can cause a lot of diseases. To summarize, humans are damaging the environment in different ways. If pollution can not be prevented, it will do humans a big disservice in their own lives.
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pollution
, soil
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pollution
, water
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pollution
are
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some of the
ways that humans are damaging the
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environment
. Due to rapid industrialization and modernization, the
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environment
has been enduring excessive harm from various sources such as: domestic trash, industrial trash, unprocessed
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waste
(including solid and liquid
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waste)
. These kinds of
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waste
are the main causes for damaging the
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environment
. The harmful smoke from industrial
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companies
, gas from means of transportation and
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people
’s burning rubbish can
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destroy
the atmosphere. Burying rubbish is the same,
especially
plastic
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wastes
, they need a long time to decompose and that process will
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make
soil less rich.
Otherwise
,
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wastes
thrown
directly
into lakes or rivers, which
consequently
cause water
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pollution
. Take Ganges River in India as an example,
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people
throw almost
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all of the
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waste
there, even corpses.
As a result
, water here is more and more
seriously
contaminated which can cause
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a lot of
diseases.
To summarize
, humans are damaging the
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environment
in
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different
ways. If
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pollution
can not be
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prevented
, it will do humans a
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big
disservice in their
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own
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lives
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IELTS essay Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment.

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