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Explain some of the ways in which human are damaging the environment. What can government do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

It's undoubtedly true that human are responsible to damaged the environment they do several things which causes of various environment problems. However, in this essay I will discuss some of my approaches as well as government and individual responsibilities. First and foremost, at the moment, the global warming has increased at large scale which is sign of threat. It spread due to the various factors for instance, gas emission from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles these all fumes contaminated to whole environment. Secondly, people spread various kind wastes in their without consider what would be consequences after this. However, these all factors cause of environment destroy. However, there are also a number of solutions which can address these all problems. Let's begin with government can certainly play a vital role to reduce air pollution such as they could introduce low to emissions from factories or to force companies that they could use solar, wind and water power so that safe to environment from contaminate. In addition, government must impose high taxes on drivers and airline companies. In such way people would encourage to use public transport as well as they would decrease foreign countries travel thus, the environment would be safe from pollution. Apart from that, individual must take their responsibility that they are also responsible to damage the environment and try to use recycle things as much as possible. Individuals should buy less packaging products, and try to keep clean their atmosphere. The shopkeepers must provide reusable bags to their customers so that they could use as long as possible. From my perspective, when the environment get damage from various mess and fumes then it create lots of harmful diseases not merely for human but animals also affect from such factors. To sum up, government and individuals should take part in this matter and try to do cooperate with each other in this issue so that overcome on these problems.
It's
undoubtedly
true that human are responsible to
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damaged
the
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environment
they do several things which causes of
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various
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environment
problems.
However
, in this essay I will discuss
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some
of my approaches
as well
as
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government
and
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individual
responsibilities.

First
and foremost, at the moment, the global warming has increased at large scale which is
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sign
of threat. It spread due to the
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various
factors
for instance
, gas emission from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles these all fumes contaminated to whole
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environment
.
Secondly
,
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people
spread
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various
kind wastes in their without consider what would be
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consequences after
this.
However
, these all factors cause of
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environment
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destroy
.
However
, there are
also
a number of solutions which can address these all problems.

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Let
's
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begin
with
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government
can
certainly
play a vital role to
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reduce
air pollution such as they could introduce low to emissions from factories or to force
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companies
that they could
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use
solar, wind and water power
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so
that safe to
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environment
from contaminate.
In addition
,
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government
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must
impose high taxes on drivers and airline
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companies
. In such way
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people
would encourage to
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use
public transport
as well
as they would decrease foreign countries travel
thus
, the
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environment
would be safe from pollution.

Apart from that,
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individual
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must
take their responsibility that they are
also
responsible to damage the
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environment
and try to
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use
recycle things as much as possible.
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Individuals
should
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buy
less packaging products, and try to
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keep
clean their atmosphere. The shopkeepers
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must
provide reusable bags to their customers
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so
that they could
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use
as long as possible.

From my perspective, when the
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environment
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get
damage from
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various
mess and fumes then it
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create
lots of harmful diseases not
merely
for
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human
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but
animals
also
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affect
from such factors.

To sum up,
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government
and
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individuals
should
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take part
in this matter and try to do cooperate with each other in this issue
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so
that overcome on these problems.
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IELTS essay Explain some of the ways in which human are damaging the environment. What can government do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
322 words
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