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Some people think that products should be made to last as long as possible, while others think making the products cheap is important. Describe both views and express your own opinion.

It is often argued by many people that long lasting products are ought to be produced, whereas some support the role of manufacturing cheaper items. There are some positives in making in-expensive items while l believe that long-running ones are to be produced. On the one hand, many others opine that building more enduring goods can save money for lifetime. As most of the manufactured items are in good quality and tend to exist for more years without affecting the texture and nature of the products.
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support the role of manufacturing cheaper items. There are
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positives in making in-expensive items while l believe that long-running ones are to
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others opine that building more enduring
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can save money for lifetime. As most of the manufactured items are in
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quality and tend to exist for more years without affecting the texture and nature of the products.

IELTS essay Some people think that products should be made to last as long as possible, while others think making the products cheap is important. Describe both views and express your own opinion.

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