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Experts bilive that robots will work instead of humens

Experts bilive that robots will work instead of humens 5kE2n
Lots of year ago all stuffs were macking by hands. By the time, machions were invented which mad people's work easy. After that, robots came up with new technology. It provided more facelties than simple mashions. Experts bilive that in futcure the robots will do work which is done by humans now. However, it's so bineftioal and also have cons. Advantiges of robots are so many such as, macking more machions, doing agricalture etc. Robots don, t fell so, they can save someone's live from a dangrus setuation. Secondly, they can run fast this, they can easily catch a criminal. Therdly, they can live and commute with humens therefore, they can work instead of humens. For example as a college, body guard, PA even as a soldure. They can fight wight with ten or more than enimes. Whatever, the robots have pros but, it also have cons. Firstly it can be harmful for humens. Because, they don't have sense, emotions and humen, s feelings. Secondly, they can be moniter from your aganist side. Robot don't leave gavin taste uncompletly. So can murder some one. As a result, experts have an idea that robots will take the place of work from humens. And, every thing has two sides. Robots also have prose and cons. Like harmfullness, people will be jobless etc. But robots have more advanteges than there cons. From my side, robot is more bineftioal than there disadvanteges.
Lots of year
ago all stuffs were
macking
by hands. By the time,
machions
were invented
which mad
people
's
work
easy. After that, robots came up with new technology. It provided more
facelties
than simple
mashions
. Experts
bilive
that in
futcure
the robots will do
work
which
is done
by humans
now
.
However
, it's
so
bineftioal
and
also
have cons.
Advantiges
of robots are
so
many
such as,
macking
more
machions
, doing
agricalture
etc. Robots
don, t
fell
so
, they can save someone's
live
from a
dangrus
setuation
.
Secondly
, they can run
fast
this, they can
easily
catch a criminal.
Therdly
, they can
live
and commute with
humens
therefore
, they can
work
instead
of
humens
.
For example
as a college, body guard, PA even as a
soldure
. They can fight wight with ten or more than
enimes
. Whatever, the robots have pros
but
, it
also
have
cons.
Firstly
it can be harmful for
humens
.
Because
, they don't have sense, emotions and
humen
, s feelings.
Secondly
, they can be
moniter
from your
aganist
side. Robot don't
leave
gavin
taste
uncompletly
.
So
can murder
some one
.
As a result
, experts have an
idea
that robots will take the place of
work
from
humens
. And, every thing has two sides. Robots
also
have prose and cons. Like
harmfullness
,
people
will be jobless etc.
But
robots have more
advanteges
than
there
cons. From my side, robot is more
bineftioal
than there
disadvanteges
.
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IELTS essay Experts bilive that robots will work instead of humens

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