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Some people prefer to marry in their early 30s but others think they should marry in 20s.What are the advantages and disadvantages of marrying late or marrying early?

Some people prefer to marry in their early 30s but others think they should marry in 20s. What are the advantages and disadvantages of marrying late or marrying early? R0P6k
Some individual would like to start their marital life in early 30s, while others feel they should marry in their early 20s. This essay will discuss the main advantages and disadvantages of marry early or marry late. To begin with, at the age of early 20s both bride and groom are young, probably they finished their studies and on ways of starting career. Marrying at an early age removes the pressure of having kids sooner or after. Peoples get more time to plan and pursue career or spend some more years with partner alone. Furthermore, People become responsible at a considerably age, which is reflect in your career. Besides this, marrying early has disadvantages also. Firstly, At this age people is not fanatically and mentally capable for new responsibilities. Secondly, when you are single, you have more control how you want to follow your career or live your life. However, after marriage you have to think about your partners too. On other hand, At age of thirties person well settle in their life. With age comes wisdom, and with experience comes a better understanding of how work together to accomplish goals together. In addition to, At late age both partners are financially independence, so combining incomes can improve financial situation. There is certain drawbacks of start marital life lately. Firstly, when someone live the single life for a long time, one develop a set of habits and expectations for how things should be done. This makes marriage a difficult path to walk because neither one want to make any changes and prefers to live their lives as have done so far. It make marriage quite an uphill task. Secondly, After ages women’s fertility decreases. Research shows that after certain age men and women both have difficulty in reproducing healthy babies. In conclusion, Marriage is a beautiful bond with two souls. So marrying late or early both comes with its own perks and drawbacks. It totally depend on person choice whether they want to marry early or late.
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removes the pressure of having kids sooner or after. Peoples
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more time to plan and pursue
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more years with partner alone.
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combining incomes can
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women’s fertility decreases. Research
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bond with two souls.
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to marry in their early 30s but others think they should marry in 20s. What are the advantages and disadvantages of marrying late or marrying early?

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