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Excessive use of mobile phones

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Many individuals have a notion that extreme usage of smartphones and computers affect youngsters’ literacy skills adversely. Due to a plethora of reasons, I agree to the above mentioned view pointTo begin with, too much reliance on electronic devices would always have a negative impact on their basic reading and writing skills. To put it simply, teenagers always communicate using informal language and short forms through their gadgets

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