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How to traffic solve the problems

How to traffic solve the problems pK3yd
It would be wrong to say that traffic congestion in megacities has not received a lot of attention over the last decade as one of the most significant issues in society. In this article, I try to introduce a lot of cars as the main cause of this phenomenon, then go on to suggest public transport as the logical solution. These points will be explained in the following paragraphs in order to draw a conclusion. There is a common assumption in society that use a personal car to speed up everyday tasks. To back this up, allow us to provide an example in this regard. Take a busy man who goes to his office about 20 km in city center. It is transparent that this person spend time in traffic everyday. As a result of this, the busy man will lose one day a week. I can form my Idea (opinion) on the fact that government can address traffic by investing in improving public transport system. A body of recent curves suggest that contras like Italy where government spends a huge amount of money on improving subway and buses have less traffic in contrast whit countries that failed to do so. This simply shows that the socializing aspects of this matter should be taken into account in a proper way. With the points mentioned above, we can definitely safely say that everything is somehow relative in this world. Hence, as long as we do not go to extremes, I am of the opinion that improving public transport system for lessening traffic is wonderful.
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to say that
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traffic
congestion in
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megacities
has not received
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a lot of
attention over the last decade as one of the most significant issues in society. In this article, I try to introduce
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a lot of
cars as the main cause of this phenomenon, then go on to suggest public transport as the logical solution. These points will be
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explained
in the following paragraphs in order to draw a conclusion.

There is a common assumption in society that
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use
a personal car to
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speed up
everyday tasks. To back this up,
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allow
us to provide an example in this regard. Take a busy
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man
who goes to his office about 20 km in city center. It is transparent that
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this person spend
time in
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traffic
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everyday
.
As a result
of this, the busy
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man
will lose one day a week.

I can form my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Idea
(opinion) on the fact that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
can address
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
traffic
by investing in improving public transport system. A body of recent curves suggest that
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contras
like Italy where
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
spends a huge amount of money on improving subway and buses have less
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traffic
in contrast
whit countries that failed to do
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so
. This
simply
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shows
that the socializing aspects of this matter should
be taken
into account
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in a proper way
.

With the points mentioned above, we can definitely
safely
say that everything is somehow relative in this world.
Hence
, as long as we do not go to extremes, I am of the opinion that improving public transport system for lessening
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
traffic
is wonderful.
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IELTS essay How to traffic solve the problems

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
5.5
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