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Everything has tow sides in the world, and so has the prosses of globalization too. The effects of globalization on the world economy are diverted.

Everything has tow sides in the world, and so has the prosses of globalization too. The effects of globalization on the world economy are diverted. 2aMWk
We must acknowledge that the negative effects are from a different kind than the positive ones. Therfor the negative sides, like low paiment in less developed countries are important to conciderate. If we take the Eurozone for example, the economic changes according to the gloablisation process are huge. Many companies have transferred their factories into cheaper production earies to compeat in the world markes. The results are rising unemployment rates in the “old industrial countries”. In regard to the other countries on the world market, such as China, this job transfer is a big opportunity. But no one can denie that the consequences for the less developed countries where economy flourished, based on availability of cheap employees are highly important: globalization based on this facts brings enviromantal problems. Nevertheless, there are also posive reasons for globlaistaional effects. In general it is remarkable that there is a new tendency in “Thinking Global”. For instance, people are willing to leran more languages and get educated about othe cultures. Countries fromaly knowen as undeveloped, such as India, are getting chances to be the main leader in a certain field. All in all it can be said that the effects of globalization are enormous. The unerstanding of economic processes has changed completely. It is important to think in bigger terms, not just about the owen country. The positive things that this globalization process have brought must sensible us for the negative sides. The all over aim should be a world in balance, but this has yet to come.
We
must
acknowledge that the
negative
effects are from a
different
kind than the
positive
ones.
Therfor
the
negative
sides, like low
paiment
in less developed
countries
are
important
to
conciderate
.

If we take the Eurozone
for example
, the economic
changes
according to the
gloablisation
process are huge.
Many
companies
have transferred their factories into cheaper production
earies
to
compeat
in the world
markes
. The results are rising unemployment rates in the “
old
industrial countries”.

In regard to the other
countries
on the world market, such as China, this job transfer is a
big
opportunity.
But
no one can
denie
that the consequences for the less developed
countries
where economy flourished, based on availability of
cheap
employees are
highly
important
: globalization based on
this
facts brings
enviromantal
problems.

Nevertheless
, there are
also
posive
reasons for
globlaistaional
effects. In
general it
is remarkable that there is a new tendency in “Thinking Global”.
For instance
,
people
are willing to
leran
more languages and
get
educated about
othe
cultures.
Countries
fromaly
knowen
as undeveloped, such as India, are getting chances to be the main leader in a certain field.

All in all it can
be said
that the effects of globalization are enormous. The
unerstanding
of economic processes has
changed
completely. It is
important
to
think
in bigger terms, not
just
about the
owen
country
. The
positive
things that this globalization process have brought
must
sensible us for the
negative
sides. The all over aim should be a world in balance,
but
this has
yet
to
come
.
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IELTS essay Everything has tow sides in the world, and so has the prosses of globalization too. The effects of globalization on the world economy are diverted.

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