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Everyone deserves to be educated. It's unfair that intelligent people are not admitted to pirvate universities because of their financial background. University education should be free for everyone. Do you agre or disagree?

Everyone deserves to be educated. It's unfair that intelligent people are not admitted to pirvate universities because of their financial background. University education should be free for everyone. Do you agre or disagree? jRo9d
In our contemporary life, we can easily notice that more people are aiming to get a education, especially at the top of the universities. In my opinion, every person deserves to have a good education and to be well-educated. However, occassionaly a number of students are not able to get hogh education, because of tuition fee, and other financial things. Frequently, the students do not see ee to eye with universities. Neither do I. Because tuition fees are so high for average people's budget. If they accept that, they can only pay for one or two years and they do not have any chance, so they give up on their study. Otherwise, the pupils could be a successful businessman, doctor, policeman, engineer and so on. Apart from that, if they cannot get a scholarship, it is more complicated. Because they should pay for transport and lunch which make them spend more and more. On the other hand, universities claim that, they use tuition fees for make the university better place to study and provide the students requirements. For instance, they make new laboraties, build new branches and new dormitories. However, rarely i do not agree with that, because in my opinion, they should have their own budget. However, I reckon for universities development, there should be tuition fee, for average people's budget. To conclude, in my view tuition fee must be reasnobale and accessible for every person, however, we ought to understand each other.
In our contemporary life, we can
easily
notice that more
people
are aiming to
get
a
education,
especially
at the top of the universities.

In my opinion, every person deserves to have a
good
education and to be well-educated.
However
,
occassionaly
a number of students are not able to
get
hogh
education,
because
of tuition
fee
, and other financial things.
Frequently
, the students do not
see
ee
to eye with
universities
. Neither do I.
Because
tuition
fees
are
so
high for average
people
's budget. If they accept that, they can
only
pay for one or two
years and
they do not have any chance,
so
they give up on their study.
Otherwise
, the pupils could be a successful businessman, doctor, policeman, engineer and
so
on. Apart from that, if they cannot
get
a scholarship, it is more complicated.
Because
they should pay for transport and lunch which
make
them spend more and more.

On the other hand
,
universities
claim that, they
use
tuition
fees
for
make
the
university
better place to study and provide the students requirements.
For instance
, they
make
new
laboraties
, build new branches and new dormitories.
However
, rarely
i
do not
agree
with that,
because
in my opinion, they should have their
own
budget.
However
, I reckon for
universities
development, there should be tuition
fee
, for average
people
's budget.

To conclude
, in my view tuition
fee
must
be
reasnobale
and accessible for every person,
however
, we ought to understand each other.
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IELTS essay Everyone deserves to be educated. It's unfair that intelligent people are not admitted to pirvate universities because of their financial background. University education should be free for everyone. Do you agre or disagree?

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