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Everyone deserves to be educated for intelligent students. It is unfair that private college or universities these days overcharge students. Education should be free for everyone, do you agree or disagree?

Education plays a crucial role in ensuring the success of a person. There is a contentious argument about whether people should pay for university education or not. In my opinion, tertiary education ought to be free for all. To begin with, the foremost reason for free education is that it will bring parity in the society. Some people are unable to pursue higher studies because of monetary concerns. Hence, free university education will benefit the weaker section of the population. Moreover, there will be tremendous impact on the economy of the nation as all the people will achieve employment opportunities due to their enhanced knowledge and skills. For instance, a nation where literacy rate is high will invariably have a higher per capita income. Furthermore, having free education can provide students an opportunity to explore a career of their own choice. To illustrate, sometimes parents cannot afford the hefty fee of professional courses like engineering and this inability hampers the child’s future as they cannot study a subject of their interest. Also, when university education is free for all, private institutions will not be able to exploit students by charging hefty fee for admission. To conclude, there are several benefits to making university education free for all. It will make the education system fair and provide equal opportunities to all. Hence, government should take imperative measures to promote free education and exploitive policies like admission through capitation should be abolished. After all, an educated population is the biggest asset of any nation
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or not. In my opinion, tertiary
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ought to be
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for all.

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is that it will bring parity in the society.
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are unable to pursue higher studies
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of monetary concerns.
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,
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free
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university
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will benefit the weaker section of the population.
Moreover
, there will be tremendous impact on the economy of the nation as all the
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people
will achieve employment opportunities due to their enhanced knowledge and
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skills
.
For instance
, a nation where literacy rate is high will
invariably
have a higher per capita income.

Furthermore
, having
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free
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can provide students an opportunity to explore a career of their
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choice. To illustrate,
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sometimes
parents cannot afford the hefty fee of professional courses like engineering and this inability hampers the child’s future as they cannot study a subject of their interest.
Also
, when
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university
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is
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for all, private institutions will not be able to exploit students by charging hefty fee for admission.

To conclude
, there are several benefits to making
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university
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education
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free
for all. It will
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make
the
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system
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fair
and provide equal opportunities to all.
Hence
,
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government
should take imperative measures to promote
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free
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education
and exploitive policies like admission through capitation should
be abolished
.
After all
, an educated population is the biggest asset of any
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IELTS essay Everyone deserves to be educated for intelligent students. It is unfair that private college or universities these days overcharge students. Education should be free for everyone,

Essay
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4 paragraphs
251 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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