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Everyday many species of plants and animals are declining. Offer the reasons for the situation and some solution to it.

Everyday many species of plants and animals are declining. Offer the reasons for the situation and some solution to it. Eqq0b
It has been sad to notice a consistent reduction in the proportion of the biodiversity around the world. This situation has its deep roots in some aspect, to which some proactive steps can prove helpful in reversing the trend. Both the aforementioned have been elaborated further. Primarily, the genesis of this decline lies in unfavorable human activities. Mankind has been indulging in large scale deforestation for its selfish purposes, further leaving lesser places with green patches. This eventually deprives not only birds and reptiles of their habitats, but also makes herbivores starve. Their numbers start reducing owing to survival issues. Apart from this, pollution is also a major culprit. Especially, the plastic waste, which is hardly degradable, on one hand stops water absorption necessary for plants; while on the other hand releases toxins that hamper soil fertility. The flora also starts perishing to a large extent in such conditions. In order to counter the aggravated conditions, there is a dire need of joint efforts of both, individuals and authorities. The global populace needs to control unnecessary expansion of habitats and industries. This will halt the destruction to an extent and allow the ecosystem to flourish. Governments of each nation have to be stringent in law enforcement related to waste generation and disposal. A fine balance needs to be achieved by ensuring the curtailing of garbage, be it household or industrial, along with appropriate provision of discarding or recycling the residue. To conclude, despite enormous harm that humans have caused to the flora and fauna by their careless approach and self-centered motives; there is still a possibility to improve the situation if the same is tackled collectively by the administration and civilians.
It has been sad to notice a consistent reduction in the proportion of the biodiversity around the

world
. This situation has its deep roots in
some
aspect, to which
some
proactive steps can
prove


helpful
in reversing the trend. Both the aforementioned have
been elaborated
further
.

Primarily
, the genesis of this decline lies in unfavorable human activities. Mankind has
been


indulging in large scale deforestation for its selfish purposes,
further
leaving lesser places with

green
patches. This
eventually
deprives not
only
birds and reptiles of their habitats,
but
also


makes
herbivores starve. Their numbers
start
reducing owing to survival issues. Apart from this,

pollution is
also
a major culprit.
Especially
, the plastic waste, which is hardly degradable, on one

hand
stops
water absorption necessary for plants; while
on the other hand
releases toxins that

hamper
soil fertility. The flora
also
starts
perishing to a large extent in such conditions.

In order to counter the aggravated conditions, there is a dire need of joint efforts of both,

individuals and authorities. The global populace needs to control unnecessary expansion
of


habitats
and industries. This will halt the destruction to an extent and
allow
the ecosystem
to


flourish
.
Governments
of each nation
have to
be stringent in law enforcement related to
waste


generation
and disposal. A fine balance needs to
be achieved
by ensuring the curtailing
of


garbage, be it household or industrial, along with appropriate provision of discarding or recycling

the
residue.

To conclude
, despite enormous harm that humans have caused to the flora and fauna by their

careless approach and self-centered motives; there is
still
a possibility to
improve
the situation if

the
same
is tackled
collectively
by the administration and civilians.
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IELTS essay Everyday many species of plants and animals are declining. Offer the reasons for the situation and some solution to it.

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