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Everybody must use of disposable goods as these products are impeccable in every

Everybody must use of disposable goods as these products are impeccable in every GN00w
Everybody must use of disposable goods as these products are impeccable in every aspects. These throwaway items should be introduced in human life. Although, the benefits of dispensables overlapping it's loss. This essay is going to articulate both sides of it Firstly, disposable is a product designed for a single use after which is recycled or disposed as a solid waste. These products are made of paper, wood, plastics and tree leaves. The most used goods as a single use are plastic food bags, straws, plastic water bottles and plastic caps and carry bags. Some of these are environmental and cost-friendly and reuseable. Moreover, these belongings are cost friendly and easy to use and throw. Secondly, if we talk about local food establishments they use food containers to packeging food and try never to compromise with food nutrients. Moreover, in order to restrict infection control, medical despensables are on first preference by doctors and nurses in hospitals. For example, these equipments come for single use like injection, syringeand test kits. It helps in prevention of spreading poison after using same examine kit on others. On the other hand, as every thing has it pros and cons. In this way, disposable items also have it's drawbacks. For example, in the fancy world, people prefer to use babies diapers instead of using cotton nappies. For instance, one baby uses 6 to 7 diapers all around the clock and it costs much expensive. To conclude, I must say although single use goods are more beneficial in various positions yet at some point if it comes to expenses they effect much costly than they are expected to be.
Everybody
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must
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use
of disposable
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goods
as these products are impeccable in every
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aspects
. These throwaway items should
be introduced
in human life.
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Although
, the benefits of
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dispensables
overlapping
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it's
loss. This essay is going to articulate both sides of
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it


Firstly
, disposable is a product designed for a
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single
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use
after which
is recycled
or disposed as a solid waste. These products
are made
of paper, wood,
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plastics
and tree
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leaves
. The most
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used
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goods
as a
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single
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use
are
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plastic
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food
bags, straws,
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plastic
water bottles and
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plastic
caps and carry bags.
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Some
of these are environmental and cost-friendly and
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reuseable
.
Moreover
, these belongings
are cost
friendly and easy to
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use
and throw.
Secondly
, if we talk about local
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food
establishments they
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use
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food
containers to
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packeging
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food
and try never to compromise with
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food
nutrients.

Moreover
, in order to restrict infection control, medical
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despensables
are on
first
preference by doctors and nurses in hospitals.
For example
, these equipments
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come
for
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single
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use
like injection,
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syringeand
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test
kits. It
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helps
in prevention of spreading poison after using same examine kit on others.

On the other hand
, as every thing has it pros and cons. In this way, disposable items
also
have
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it's
drawbacks.
For example
, in the fancy world,
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people
prefer to
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use
babies diapers
instead
of using cotton nappies.
For instance
, one baby
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uses
6 to 7 diapers all around the clock and it costs much expensive.

To conclude
, I
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must
say although
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single
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use
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goods
are more beneficial in various positions
yet
at
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some
point if it
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comes
to expenses they effect much costly than they are
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expected
to be.
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IELTS essay Everybody must use of disposable goods as these products are impeccable in every

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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