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EVERY YEAR SEVERAL LANGUAGES DIE OUT. SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT IT WOULD BE EASIER IT FEWER LANGUAGE ARE THERE. GIVE YOUR OPINION ABOUT IT.

EVERY YEAR SEVERAL LANGUAGES DIE OUT. SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT IT WOULD BE EASIER IT FEWER LANGUAGE ARE THERE. GIVE YOUR OPINION ABOUT IT. 0lGM5
IN THE WORLD, MANY LANGUAGES FOUND THAT A LOT OF ACCORDING TO THEIR CULTURE, TRADITIONS AND ALSO FOUND BASED ON THEIR NATIVE PLACES LIKE THAT IN THE GUJARAT STATE, 37 LANGUAGES KNOWN AS LINGO. IF YOU THINK LANGUAGES ARE IMPORTANT? OFF-COURSE, THAT IS REPRESENT US. IN TODAY'S ERA, LANGUAGES ARE VERY USEFUL FOR THE REPRESENTING US AND IF YOU ARE GOING FOR A FOREIGN CITY, LANGUAGES IS VERY USEFUL FOR YOU. DAY-BY-DAY WORLD MOVING ON FORWARD LIFE-STYLE, DRASTIC CHANGE IN CULTURES AND TRADITIONS. SO SEVERAL LANGUAGES DIE OUT, WHICH LANGUAGE KNOWN BY THE SMALL GROUP OF PEOPLE OR SMALL TOWN LANGUAGE. THAT PEOPLE CAPTURING NEW LANGUAGE, WHICH COMMON IN THE CITY AREA OR CURRENT CULTURE. AS THE RESULT OUT THAT SEVERAL LANGUAGE DIE AND THEY REPLACE BY THE OTHER FAMOUS LANGUAGE. DUE TO THE GLOBALISATION IN THE WORLD, LEADING COUNTRIES LANGUAGE ARE MORE FAMOUS BECAUSE OF EVERY PEOPLE WANTS BUSINESS WITH HIM. SO THAT IS ANOTHER ONE RESULT. EVERY COIN HAS TWO SIDES, WE THINK FLIP SIDE OF THIS TOPIC, IF YOU TARGET THAT I LEARN THIS LANGUAGE, IT IS EASIER TASK FOR YOU. IN OUR LIFE, IF WE ARE SPOILE FEWER OF LANGUAGE. THAT IS NOT TUFFETS PART. I STRONGLY BELIEVE THAT EVERY LANGUAGE IS EASIER FOR US BECAUSE WHEN WE ARE BORN, WE DO NOT KNOW ANY LANGUAGES BUT AS TIME GOES, WE LEARN OUR MOTHER TONGUE. WE DO NOT TAKE LANGUAGE COURSE CLASSES REQUIRED BECAUSE WE GROW IN THAT ATMOSPHERE. SO I STRONGLY BELIEVE THAT EVERY LANGUAGES IS EASIER BECAUSE ONE TIME YOU. TAKE A DECISION IN YOUR MIND, THAT IS NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE FOR US. GIVE YOU A BEST EXAMPLE, MY FRIEND SMIT PATEL IS GROWN UP IN GUJARATI CULTURE AND SPEEK VERY WELL GUJARATI LANGUAGE IN THE SCHOOL TIME. HE LEARN HINDI AND ENGLISH LANGUAGE AND HE IS GOOD KNOWLEDGE RIGHT NOW. BUT AFTER COMPLETING THEIR GRADUATION. HE IS PLANNING TO MOVE TO CANADA. SO HE DECIDED THAT LEARN THE FRENCH LANGUAGE. AFTER 4 WEEKS WHEN WE ARE MEET, HE WAS SPEAKING VERY GOOD FRENCH LANGUAGE. SO NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE IN LIFE. IN CONCLUSION, LANGUAGE IS ONE PART OFF LIFE, IT IS NECESSARY TO TEACH LANGUAGE. IF YOU KNOW MORE LANGUAGES THAT IS GOOD FOR YOU AND YOU ARE NOT FACING PROBLEMS. IN MY OPINION, I STRONGLY BELIEVE THAT LANGUAGE WOULD BE EASIER IF YOU LOVE IT.
IN THE WORLD,
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MANY
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FOUND THAT
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A LOT OF
ACCORDING TO THEIR
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CULTURE
, TRADITIONS AND
ALSO
FOUND BASED ON THEIR NATIVE PLACES LIKE THAT IN THE GUJARAT STATE, 37
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KNOWN AS LINGO. IF YOU
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THINK
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ARE
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IMPORTANT
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REPRESENT US.

IN
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TODAY
'S ERA,
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ARE
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USEFUL FOR THE REPRESENTING US AND IF YOU ARE GOING FOR A FOREIGN CITY,
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IS
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VERY
USEFUL FOR YOU. DAY-BY-DAY WORLD MOVING ON FORWARD LIFE-STYLE, DRASTIC
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CHANGE
IN
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CULTURES
AND TRADITIONS.
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SO
SEVERAL
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LANGUAGES
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DIE
OUT, WHICH
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KNOWN BY THE
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SMALL
GROUP OF
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PEOPLE
OR
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SMALL
TOWN
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. THAT
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PEOPLE
CAPTURING NEW
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, WHICH COMMON IN THE CITY AREA OR
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CURRENT
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CULTURE
. AS THE RESULT OUT THAT SEVERAL
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LANGUAGE
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DIE
AND THEY REPLACE BY THE OTHER
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FAMOUS
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LANGUAGE
. DUE TO THE
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GLOBALISATION
IN THE WORLD, LEADING COUNTRIES
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ARE MORE
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FAMOUS
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BECAUSE
OF EVERY
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PEOPLE
WANTS BUSINESS WITH HIM.
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SO
THAT IS
ANOTHER ONE RESULT.

EVERY COIN HAS TWO SIDES, WE
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THINK
FLIP SIDE OF THIS TOPIC, IF YOU TARGET THAT I
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LEARN
THIS
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LANGUAGE
, IT IS
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EASIER
TASK FOR YOU. IN OUR LIFE, IF WE ARE
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SPOILE
FEWER OF
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.
THAT IS
NOT TUFFETS PART. I
STRONGLY
BELIEVE THAT EVERY
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IS
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EASIER
FOR US
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BECAUSE
WHEN WE
ARE BORN
, WE DO NOT KNOW ANY
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LANGUAGES
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BUT
AS TIME GOES, WE
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LEARN
OUR MOTHER TONGUE. WE DO NOT TAKE
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COURSE CLASSES REQUIRED
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BECAUSE
WE GROW IN THAT ATMOSPHERE.
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SO
I
STRONGLY
BELIEVE THAT EVERY
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IS
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EASIER
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BECAUSE
ONE TIME YOU. TAKE A DECISION IN YOUR MIND,
THAT IS
NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE FOR US. GIVE YOU
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A
BEST EXAMPLE, MY
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FRIEND SMIT
PATEL
IS GROWN
UP IN GUJARATI
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CULTURE
AND
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SPEEK
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VERY
WELL GUJARATI
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LANGUAGE
IN THE SCHOOL TIME. HE
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LEARN
HINDI AND ENGLISH
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AND HE IS
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GOOD
KNOWLEDGE RIGHT
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NOW
.
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BUT
AFTER COMPLETING THEIR GRADUATION. HE IS PLANNING TO
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MOVE
TO CANADA.
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SO
HE DECIDED THAT
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LEARN
THE FRENCH
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LANGUAGE
. AFTER 4 WEEKS WHEN WE ARE
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MEET
, HE WAS SPEAKING
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VERY
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GOOD
FRENCH
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.
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SO
NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE IN LIFE.

IN CONCLUSION
,
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LANGUAGE
IS ONE PART OFF LIFE, IT IS NECESSARY TO TEACH
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LANGUAGE
. IF YOU KNOW MORE
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LANGUAGES
THAT IS
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GOOD
FOR YOU AND YOU ARE NOT FACING PROBLEMS. IN MY OPINION, I
STRONGLY
BELIEVE THAT
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WOULD BE
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EASIER
IF YOU
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LOVE
IT.
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IELTS essay EVERY YEAR SEVERAL LANGUAGES DIE OUT. SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT IT WOULD BE EASIER IT FEWER LANGUAGE ARE THERE. GIVE YOUR OPINION ABOUT IT.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
392 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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