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Every women should wear makeup? Do you agree or disagree?

Every women should wear makeup? Do you agree or disagree? raaQl
Every women should wear makeup, because women will be adorable when they wear makeup. Nowadays, you can watch on the internet sites. From teenagers to adults can make up themselves. Firstly, you might be hear this beauty save the world. Some girls don't like makeup or maybe they can't do it themselves. Women's beauty can see with cosmetics. Secondly, if one girl might be taste the beauty with cosmetics. After that, I disagree with teenagers, because their skin is very young to wear makeup. They have gorgeous skin. They don't need cosmetic products or surgery. Therefore cosmetic stores don't sell any cosmetics to teens. In conclusion, I agree with girls to keep up with makeup. Therefore I can make up myself in the house. If any girls need to cosmetics. They should wear makeup by themselves.
Every
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women
should
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wear
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makeup
,
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because
women will be adorable when they
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wear
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makeup
. Nowadays, you can
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watch
on the internet sites. From
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teenagers
to adults can
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make
up themselves.

Firstly
, you might be
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hear
this beauty save the world.
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Some
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girls
don't like
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makeup
or maybe they can't do it themselves. Women's beauty can
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see
with
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cosmetics
.
Secondly
, if one
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girl
might be taste the beauty with cosmetics.

After that, I disagree with
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teenagers
,
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because
their skin is
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very
young to
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wear
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makeup
. They have gorgeous skin. They don't need
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cosmetic
products or surgery.
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Therefore
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cosmetic
stores don't sell any
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cosmetics
to teens.

In conclusion
, I
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agree
with
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girls
to
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keep
up with
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makeup
.
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Therefore
I can
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make
up myself in the
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house
.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
any
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girls
need to
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cosmetics
. They should
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wear
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makeup
by themselves.
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IELTS essay Every women should wear makeup? Do you agree or disagree?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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