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Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.

Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws. NyVgd
Every society needs laws to prevent any egregious behaviour from taking place. Just laws treat people equally and protect their rights. On the other hand, unjust laws are the one's that discriminate amongst humans and treat them differently. These laws have no place in any society and need to be abolished. Thus, I agree with the prompt that we need to obey just laws and disobey unjust laws for 2 reasons. Laws help in smooth functioning of society. There will be chaos if people don't follow laws. Following laws is a responsibility of each and every individual in a society. People feel safe due to laws. . . . Sometimes resisting unjust laws is the only way to get the laws abolished. When British colonized India, they introduced many unjust laws to discriminate against Indians. Similarly there were unjust laws in America that discriminated against black people. Many believed in obeying such unjust laws and waiting for a change of heart of the rulers. But Mahatma Gandhi and Martin Luther King Jr. believed that this was counterproductive and they publicly disobeyed and resisted unjust laws. Both of them were imprisoned, which led to a uprising and later the laws were successfully repealed Some people might argue even if a law is unjust one should not break laws. As breaking a law is illegal. Some Indian freedom fighters such as Lokmanya Tilak believed in such ideologies. They wrote letters to the British government requesting them to repeal such laws. British government did not pay heed to any requests, and their plan turned out to be fruitless. On the other hand extremist leaders such has Bhagat Singh tried to revolt and disobey laws and was lionised in India To conclude, following laws is crucial for functioning of a society. But that does not mean people should accept any unjust laws. They disobey any unjust laws and take a stand to repeal them.
Every
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society
needs
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laws
to
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prevent
any egregious
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behaviour
from taking place.
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Just
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laws
treat
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people
equally
and protect their rights.
On the other hand
,
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unjust
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laws
are the one's that discriminate amongst humans and treat them
differently
. These
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laws
have no place in any
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society
and need to
be abolished
.
Thus
, I
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agree
with the prompt that we need to obey
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just
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laws
and disobey
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unjust
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laws
for 2 reasons.

Laws
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help
in smooth functioning of
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society
. There will be chaos if
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people
don't follow
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laws
. Following
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laws
is a responsibility of each and every individual in a
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society
.
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People
feel safe due to
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laws
.
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.
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Sometimes
resisting
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unjust
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laws
is the
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only
way to
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get
the
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abolished. When British colonized India, they introduced
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many
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unjust
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laws
to discriminate against Indians.
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Similarly
there were
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unjust
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laws
in America that discriminated against black
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people
.
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Many
believed in obeying such
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unjust
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laws
and waiting for a
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change
of heart of the rulers.
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But
Mahatma Gandhi and Martin Luther King Jr. believed that this was
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counterproductive and
they
publicly
disobeyed and resisted
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unjust
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laws
. Both of them
were imprisoned
, which led to
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a
uprising and later the
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laws
were
successfully
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repealed


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Some
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people
might argue even if a
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law
is
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unjust
one should not break
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laws
.
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As
breaking a
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law
is illegal.
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Some
Indian freedom fighters such as
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Lokmanya
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Tilak
believed in such ideologies. They wrote letters to the British
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government
requesting them to repeal such
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laws
. British
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government
did not pay heed to any requests, and their plan turned out to be fruitless.
On the other hand
extremist leaders such has
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Bhagat
Singh tried to revolt and disobey
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laws
and was
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lionised
in
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India


To conclude
, following
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laws
is crucial for functioning of a
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society
.
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But
that does not mean
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people
should accept any
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unjust
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laws
. They disobey any
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unjust
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laws
and take a stand to repeal them.
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IELTS essay Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
320 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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